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Review #1, by Starry_Eyed So that's the new girl

31st July 2013:
Another good chapter, and assuming this is a James/OC story, than I look forward to seeing some funny competition/conflict between Fred and James when James starts to like Dahila. :)

Author's Response: Yes, this is a James/OC story. I as well am looking forward to the competition/conflict when James takes a liking to Dahlia :) I can't wait!

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Review #2, by Starry_Eyed Train rides, Hogwarts, and Roommates

31st July 2013:
If you want constructive criticism, than I'd say check your grammar. (But I would not take offense to this because as writers we are guilty of it.) Otherwise, your story has a very nice begging, and wonderful chapter image.

Author's Response: Thanks! Trust me, I don't take offense. If anything I think that is it helpful to point that out so that I can remember to check for mistakes :)

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