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Review #1, by LilyEPotter Land of the Lost Souls

6th March 2014:
How very sad and very interesting at the beginning when Albus' classmate stopped by to pass on the message. Why only the apology and not telling everyone that he loved them? As it was, it only seemed to confirm that Albus' classmate had a special ability. Perhaps the apology could let them know it was really Albus and then continue with a message? It must have been really strange for Albus to meet all of his family that had continued on. Perhaps Severus was elsewhere? Their reactions, particularly Sirius' reactions, were priceless. I wonder if Lily Luna still shudders at the memory of Teddy's joke. I could see that being completely terrifying like the twins' joke to Ron with the teddy bear becoming a spider.

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Author's Response: I thought I'd play on the fact that the Trelawneys were always a bit... how to put it nicely... odd.

The thing about not having Snape in the piece was because even though he did do all that to save Harry, I think he still had enough pride not to go asking Lily for forgiveness and decided to just stay out of the way, regardless of what Dumbledore had told them. Plus, I really think the moon would have to fall from the sky before Sirius and Snape would remain in the same room together for more than a minute, voluntarily.


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