3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by toomanycurls Taking over the mall.

2nd October 2013:
Good job, I did end up laughing. ^_^

Did you think of ICECUBE? That was my first lol (I mean literal lol - my husband asked what I was doing). You might want to add more descriptions and action to the dialogue heavy plot. Your dialogue is hilarious but it kind of happens in a vacuum.

I got a kick out of the actual heroes being at the same mall (and Batman's "this should be more bitter). Also, the "shoo, shoo, no one likes you" got me laughing as well.

Have you seen Mall Rats? This would fit in with that movie. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I actually did think of Ice cube.
Okay, so I kinda wrote this last year. Back when I was a bad writer xD. But now I am actually learning something at school and will probably get better.

If you havent already read the prequel to this!

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Review #2, by u_got_RavenCLAWED Taking over the mall.

29th September 2013:
I. Can't. Breathe. *gasp* Story. Too. Hilarious. *gasp*

Whatever. BWAHAHA! Mojo Jojo in high heels. THAT evoked a few unwanted mental pictures. And Darth Vader in a Princess Leia bikini.

Once, a friend of mine told me that if you laugh for 24 hours straight, you'll have a six pack. Hmm... I wonder why I don't have one...

Author's Response: thanks! Btw, love your user name.

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Review #3, by ginerva_molly_weasley Taking over the mall.

16th July 2013:
This is hilarious! I couldn't keep myself from laughing when I read about all my favourite villains together in one story. I must say Voldemort was my favourite though. How he just took control of a most difficult group of people who all wanted to lead well you have to admire him for that!

The part at the end though throwing all of the good characters in was just a stroke of brilliance and I thought that it was truly hilarious to see all the villains and heros in one room after they had tried to prove their evilness by taking over the mall. Surely when taking it over they would have noticed all the heros there.

I think my favourite part though was when people crowded around them after thinking they were the heros. You can only imagine how much they hated that and poor Mojo Jojo being sent to the corner. That's not nice.

It was just so funny though!

Author's Response: thanks! me and my sister was kinda hyper so we came up with this. :P I am happy u enjoyed this.

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