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Review #1, by HeyMrsPotter All was well

15th July 2013:
Awh, this was really bittersweet!

I think it was true to Harry's character completely. I liked that you told the story of his life in such few words and yet I got the perfect picture of it. I particularly liked the part about him being told off by his children for spoiling his grandchildren. It's a very grandparent thing to do! The only little advice I'd give is that generally numbers under 100 are written as words as opposed to digits :) other than that tiny detail I enjoyed this :)

Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad you liked this! I will remember that numbers are written as words one day, I will!
Thanks for the review! :)


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Review #2, by patronus_charm All was well

22nd June 2013:
This wasnít morbid at all! In fact, I thought it was really great :D

I never really hear much about Harry as a father or as a grandfather so I liked how you included the little titbits about him here as it really added to the story. It made me sad that he never got that much time with his children, but it made sense too, as I can imagine he would be out wanting to save the world. I like the way he almost made up for it by being with his grandchildren and that was really sweet ♥

When he started talking about him being the last one to go it really saddened me. I thought that Ginny had died from the way he had been talking about his children but I didnít guess that the others had too. It was really cool how you linked it in with the Golden Trio as it would make sense that he would be the last one to die as he is the boy who lived.

Another thing I really liked was the way you said that Harry Potter died as a happy man. That linked in really well with the whole Deathly Hallows thing about how the third brother accepted death and welcomed it and as heís a descendent of it worked really well.

Overall, I thought this was a really great one-shot Shaza :D

-Kiana

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Review #3, by lovethepotters All was well

22nd June 2013:
I'll be the first reviewer :) Wow this is different and yet so interesting! I've never read a story about Harry in his old age!

I think you've done a brilliantly with the characterisation - for around 800 words, I think you've managed to succinctly sum up Harry's life.

Just a few points: considering you've mentioned he dies on a full moon day, I would have liked to have seen some sort of mention of Remus and the rest of the Marauders. A mention of Teddy would have also been nice to see, considering Harry is his godfather! I'm sure Teddy would have played a significant part in his life. I would have also liked you to have talked about Harry's parents - finally he'd be reunited with them after the tragedy that ripped their family apart.

I'm nit-picking really, just thought I'd give some suggestions! You've done an amazing job! Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Hey!

Ahaha, yeah I'm not sure where it came from but I just went with it and thanks, I was worried it was too short to actually get a story or feeling across!

There good ideas, I'll probably go back and edit it to see if I can make it a bit longer so thanks for that! Thanks for the review too! :)


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