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Review #1, by milominderbinder I

2nd December 2013:
Hiya! Wow this was an amazing story, I loved it!

Elsa was a brilliant character. She was fun to read because she was so realistic - she's cynical like me ahah, so I could identify with her. I love that you showed a side where life after Hogwarts isn't perfect, because a lot of fic really seems to idealise the wizarding world and make it seem like all wizards are happy and successful, but that's not true! you highlighted it really well here but in a way that didn't seem too bitter.

Elsa and Dean's relationship was really interesting, as was Elsa and James'!

Your dialogue is brilliant, really witty and natural, and captivating to read. You really hooked me in just this short chapter.

Hope you continue this because it's a great read with original characters and you're a talented writer :)


Author's Response: Aww thank you very much! I might consider writing up a few more chapters as this was quite interesting to write. Works just been a little crazy recently and I haven't had the time. Thanks for the review though and I'm glad you liked it

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