Reading Reviews for The Godfather
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Sidney Chapter 2

11th April 2016:
Alright, I am ready of taking this ride with you and see what kind of adventure you can come up with.

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Review #2, by whiteferret Chapter 2

5th November 2014:
Good story. Hope you come back and finish it.

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Review #3, by Taylor1991 Chapter 1

6th September 2013:
Intriguing concept. It's a pity that James wrote off Remus's stress as him being the trator, and that he also wrote off Sirius because he was to obvious. Because this left that horrid thing able to betray Lily and James. Even though I knew from the start how things would turn out, my heart still clenched when Harry said "No Padfoo",(I can't imagine a child witnessing such a horrid act) and when he panicked upon seeing the dark mark over the house. I can't believe that this hasn't received a review yet. I publish on another site and therefore know how important it is to an author to get reviews, so I'm going to review :P

I also want to help others whenever possible, so I want to let you know that after some of your paragraphs, there's big chunks of space, it might be distracting to some, I'm guessing you're new here and that's why it looks kind of weird. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. It means a lot. I've posted a few other things on here, but I'm now working with a Mac so getting the formatting right is kind of trial and error. I didn't realize the gaps were that big. Thanks for the heads up!

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