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Review #1, by Hats For House Elves The Fool You Made Me

8th May 2014:
I really like the short story with such a simple plot line. You don't complicate it by trying to cover the whole school year. You stick to feelings and a new perspective of small moments and write it so well.

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Review #2, by cranes113 The Fool You Made Me

25th August 2013:
This is the best story anyone has ever written. No lie.
I think the thing that really makes your story stand out is that you made neither Snape nor James look like a jackass--congratulations! I could see the good in both of them, which is hard to come by in the world of fanfiction. I loved the descriptions, too. Beautiful job :)

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