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Review #1, by pattybuns_hpf Leap of Faith

27th July 2013:
A leap of faith indeed! Oh, Lily, it was bound to happen that you'd be the one asking instead.

That was a breath of fresh air and different, by the way. I usually find it so cliche when it's Lily asking James out, but from the way you were going about this story, I rather liked it. Good on James for finally giving Lily the confidence of doing it herself. It really was what she needed.

Also, I very much liked how you made their relationship, not so necessarily only about their fancy for each other but also the social issues it caused on the minority who witnessed their exchange. And it was not just Snape that Lily worried about there, but also the whole of the Slytherins.

Oh yeah, the one thing that bothered me in this chapter was that you made Mary MacDonald a pure-blood when in canon she's a muggle-born. However, it's not thoroughly so bothering because I also find it interesting. So, why the change?

Anyways, on to the next chapter I go now. :)
-Patty

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Review #2, by pattybuns_hpf Assumptions

26th July 2013:
I did not expect that kiss. I mean, yes, I was predicting it would happen, but not quite there. Oh well, it was bound to happen. I very am curious on how they'll get on from that. I do hope Lily will see that James really does care despite her being a muggle-born.

Again, I very much like how you're making the issue of blood statuses really significant in the relationship of James and Lily and Lily with the whole of the wizarding world. It feels so much like the olden days where noble high society were the important people while those of little wealth were tossed aside. Oh my, this is going good.

So, anyway, on I go to the next chapter!

-Patty.

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Review #3, by pattybuns_hpf Respect

26th July 2013:
I very much like how you're incorporating the issue of blood statuses into the story. I rather liked reading Lily's worries and understandings about it. It is an issue that is sometimes exaggerated or not mentioned at all in other fanfics I've read. From what I am reading in this chapter, it's real and an issue that cannot be ignored because it is happening.

Curious as always, on to the next chapter I go. :)

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Review #4, by pattybuns_hpf Prejudice

26th July 2013:
You've got a good start of a fantastic story going on here. I am very curious to where it leads. So here I go on to the next chapter.

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Review #5, by AccioTeddyLupin Assumptions

8th July 2013:
way to end a chapter.

bravo. bravo.

can't wait for the next chapter!

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Review #6, by Corinna Assumptions

23rd June 2013:
SOOO GOOD wright more!

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Review #7, by BBWotter Prejudice

16th June 2013:
This is great! I really really like it, and I want to read more now! I hope you put up another chapter up soon :) xx

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