hi!

this is an AMAZING STORY! i really wish you would update again!

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i liked it.
again.

just a note; you spelt fawkes wrong. you left out the 'e' :]

again, fast-paced and keeps you reading.

oh, how i love sirius.

8/10

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i like that it's fast-paced and it keeps you reading.

i was so enticed.

james is so sweet, really. and remus is just too darn cool.

i'm going to have a guess and say that sirius and cassie will get together by the end of the ff.

i'm also thinking there'll be some remus and... OH gabriella. couldn't think of her name. i can't wait to read about her and alice.

Ooo. excitement

9/10

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wow, i mean all i can say is awesome! this is officially one of my favorites! yeah it took me about a week to read it but I get distracted easily. So totally amazing.



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Peter is so mean! I can't believe him. Peter/Bellatrix = gross. I'm happy for James and Lily but sad about what happened to their families. Great story! 10/10 =)

Author's Response: peter is a very horrid man. in the beginning i didnt set up to kill sarah until later on, but when i had to kill grace off it just went with the flow. i had fallen in love with james and lily's families too and it killed me to kill them, especially grace and sarah. what is going to kill me the most is killing off lily and james, makin harry an orphan, makin sirius fall for the blame and turning alice and frank insane.

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Do you know who the actors and actresses are on your banner??? lol I am writing a Marauder story and I want to make a banner, but I cant seem to find any good pictures for the characters. And the pictures that you have of them seem to be the way I picture them!! I can't wait for the next chapter to your other story! I love it! :D

Author's Response: i know the girl as lily is rachel mcadams the others, i am not really sure. someone made the banner for me.

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This is the most emotional, exciting, romantic, most beautifully written fan fiction story I have ever read! This is my absolute fave! Exceptional work!

Author's Response: thank you so much...i have taken a bit of a vacation from writting but i have picked it back up...there is an 2nd part to it...go read it!

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Cute, I loved Sirius' happy dance. LOL. 9/10

Author's Response: yes it was quite funny wasn't it?

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Very cheesy but cute. Love it. 9/10

Author's Response: thanks i think

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Sirius has a knack for interrupting things doesn't he, and its a pain in the ass that Lily didn't listen to James before she left or she would be going with him and not the duffer that is Diggory (I always put him in Hufflepuff). 9/10

Author's Response: yes Sirius does have a knack for interruptin everything but he wouldnt be sirius w/out it.

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Bloody Sirius, he has the emotional capacity of a single celled organism. Oh well, I'll get over it. What happened to Lily's parents the suspense is killing me!! 9/10 (I really like the talking at the same time thing it was very effective)

Author's Response: thank you, glad you approved

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Oh ho Blake and Abigail are going to get hurt aren't they :( James is so sweet and Lily is acting less stuck up so yay. 9/10

Author's Response: you will just have to keep on reading to see

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drama drama drama, gosh james is a gentleman, and blake is exactly like my father. 8/10

Author's Response: yes james has grown up, finally, lol.

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Okay that converstion between Sirius and Cassie about copying notes was fairly confusing but that made me laugh which I think was the intended purpose so kudos to you. 8/10

Author's Response: thanks

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Awww that was really sad, but sweet in the end. Sirius is hilarious as per usual, and Peter kind of has a part in it which seems a bit more realistic in fifth year considering he'd have to remaing friends with the rest of the Marauders for a while to even be considered to be made secret keeper so good job. 9/10

Author's Response: thanks

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upodate

Author's Response: sorry...

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snuggling up with HANDSOME (such an understatment) James Potter

o0o0o0ohhh ;D

girls got it bad she knows him like 3 days and cant sleep without him LOL poor little lily oh well shes still in 4th year there'll be pleanty of time for that later right*shrugs* so great story love it and ill shut up know so i can get back to it kk :)

Author's Response: year 5, but yeah shes got it bad

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“Reading between the lines, I’d say she thinks you’re a bit conceited, mate,” LOL I LOVE SIRIUS hes soo stupid lol

Author's Response: lol i think that is one of my favorite lines

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“Reading between the lines, I’d say she thinks you’re a bit conceited, mate,” LOL I LOVE SIRIUS hes soo stupid lol

Author's Response: lol that's one of my favorite lines

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“Reading between the lines, I’d say she thinks you’re a bit conceited, mate,” LOL I LOVE SIRIUS hes soo stupid lol

Author's Response: love him 2


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No I'm sorry but you can't do that... it's not fair... make james get his memory back... what am I saying? You've already written the story

Author's Response: i have already written the story, and i just couldnt have them together like this through the next few years...sorry.

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That is so horrible... Lily can't date that nyah

Author's Response: sorry.

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your an amazing writer and i cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: thank you.

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i just wanted to say... my cuzin did a draco/hermione ff and i got all mad, but after i read it, i realized it just made me see that the ron/hermione (or in this case, james/lilly) thing was so important. I think you were smart to put lilly with tyler

Author's Response: thank you

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You can't do that last bit... it's horrible... i mean i know that lily and james get together in the end but only because ive read the books... i just hope you dont change that!!!

Author's Response: no i wont change that, they are going to get back together, but i couldnt have them together for that long, it would get boring and dull.

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