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Review #1, by EnigmaticEyes16 insanity.

14th July 2013:
Wow, this was very powerful story. I think you handled the situation well though. Not glorifying it, but at the same time expressing her clear path to insanity. I do sometimes wonder what happened to Lavender, whether she became a werewolf or not. In your story, it's not clear that she did but it sounds like she didn't. She says nothing about being a werewolf, just about being attacked by one. I was really intrigued by the bit about her demons coming to get her. Her own insanity and her own visions leading up to her death. That was really interesting.

This was also very well written. Although there is one part where you use disrepair, and I'm not quite sure whether or not that's actually what you meant, or if you really meant despair. I suppose technically either could work. She was in a bit of disrepair, since she chose to drink herself to death instead of trying to live. I enjoyed the bit though where she calls Hermione a smartass cow, that was my first tipoff as to who this might be about before she states her name.

Anyway, all in all this was really good. Although very sad. i think you did a wonderful job portraying a very different side to Lavender.


Author's Response: Hii! Thanks for such a lovely review! x

No, in my story, she didn't become a werewolf because (if I'm correct), Greyback wasn't fully transformed when he attacked her. Or, if that's not factually correct, we'll just say Hermione Stupefied him before he did any proper damage (when I say "proper", I mean turn her into a werewolf. I think he did a lot of damage even without that aspect).

Yeah, I think I probably did mean that xD Thanks for pointing that out :P I figured Lavender would hold a grudge against Hermione for "stealing" Ron (but Romione all the way!). I did write another version where Ron manages to find Lavender and Hermione follows him and all three of them end up dead, but I figured that would be a little too depressing.

Thank you for such a wonderful review! You made my day :D

Summer x

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Review #2, by RosieWeasly11 insanity.

14th June 2013:
this was good, bit sad tho. I think ur better at funny fics not writing about death but meh. it a good story xox

Author's Response: Yeah, it was meant to be sad :P meh, I'm getting mixed reviews about my sad stories, IDEK ANYMORE! But thanks :P xx

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