4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by zealousVisionary Jess: Dad's Bad Luck And Stacey's Friends

9th July 2014:
House Cup 2014 Review

I'm not going to lie, the title of your story drew me in right away, and the first chapter did not disappoint!

The first sentence drew me into the story right away, and my attention was held throughout the chapter, which I often find first chapters don't do well.

Something else I loved was the characters that have been introduced. Jess is a clever, interesting, and funny MC who I liked right away. I just love her narration! And her relationship with Stacey is awesome too so far- it's just so cute! I can't wait to learn more about Stacey in the next chapter.

Great start to this fic- I'm loving it so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the first chapter! Hopefully you like the rest of it equally as much. I am an extremely lousy updater though :/

Your review is so nice, it's literally made my day! Thank you ever so much for that, and I'm happy that at least one person had a good time reading it (or even read it at all).

Josie :)

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Review #2, by Mj Sophie: Louis' Sexuality And Michael's Outburst

18th December 2013:
Oh come on man. I've got to have more of it! UPDATE!

Author's Response: I've literally been curled up on the floor of my room for the past two months. This is because we have been without Internet. Expect about a dozen chapters soon.

Josie :)

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Review #3, by LightLeviosa5443 Jess: Stacey's Departure And My Departure

27th November 2013:
Hi! So, I must admit, I wasn't sure about this story for the first several chapters, but I'm interested in seeing how everything connects. Very interesting story line, and characters.

Switching POV every other chapter is very unique too, I like it. Good job, can't wait to read more.

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Yes, the first few chapters were very fluffy. I was trying to lay the foundation for the story, and introduce all of the characters in a way that didn't seem too "this is so-and-so, they like cheese and play football"-y. Glad you like the POV changes, I wasn't too sure about that.

I hope you keep reading, I promise things get more interesting within the next few chapters.

Josie :)

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Review #4, by Jordan Jess: Dad's Bad Luck And Stacey's Friends

10th June 2013:
I really like it so far. You did a good job introducing the characters. Please update soon :)

Author's Response: Naww, yay, my first review! Glad you liked it, I have most of Chapters 2 and 3 written up but I don't really have much more than that, the story's still mostly in my mind at the moment. But hopefully it won't take me too long to update. I'm a bit of a perfectionist so there won't be a new chapter every day but I'm aiming to have at least one chapter per week up, if not more. Thanks for reviewing!

Josie :)

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