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Review #1, by HeyMrsPotter Behind The Legend

15th July 2013:
Aww baby Neville! This was just so sweet! I really like that I didn't know who the story was about until near the end, it's kept me interested. And well done for writing in 500 words, something I could never do as I have a tendancy to ramble! Spelling and grammar were good and you used some really Lovely descriptions. Thanks for a great read :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I did find it a bit difficult, but I wanted to keep it short and sweet! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Review #2, by maskedmuggle Behind The Legend

14th July 2013:

I thought this was a really short but great story! I thought it was about Lily/James initially, but I liked how it was actually about Frank/Alice. Stories with Frank/Alice are usually very tragic, so I really liked the sweet and happy nature of this short moment where they were enjoying their first moments as proud parents of Neville.

My knowledge is a bit rusty, and maybe I'm remembering this wrong, but did the Longbottoms actually know about the prophecy? Anyway, I thought this was quite well-written :)

- Charlotte/maskedmuggle
House Cup 2013

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you thought that at first as that was my intention! :)

You're very probably right, but I liked the idea that they knew about the prophecy, at least in part, because of the Order.

Thank you for your review!

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