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Review #1, by Celeste Back to Normal

20th January 2015:
Best mini revenge on accident ever. Uhh got to love how she accidentally threw up on Jenna. I spat out my energy drink and now my phone is sticky just because of that line.

Aw Freddie got juice on him. Ah well don't burp in a girls face ya noob.

Can't wait for the next chapter don't know what ill do without this story when it's done. Maybe read it again. Idk lol.

Author's Response: Karma has a way of biting people back in the bum and Jenna deff got what she deserved! Aw, haha, I'm sorry!

I agree! He needs to learn manners

Aw that's so sweet! You should read my story I'm currently writing called Just Fly with It!

Thanks for the review!

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Review #2, by easy2500 Back to Normal

20th January 2015:
HEY i'm so glad you're back!!! I have a question, is the part where Brielle and Josh going to hogsmede coming soon? THAT WOULD BE AWESOME IF IT DID !! but anyways you're a fantastic writer, keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you! Josh appears in the next chapter (preparing for the big slytherin vs Gryffindor game)and the following chapter will have the Hogsemede trip THEN the game! Aw thank you so much!

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Review #3, by Lobelia Sackville-Baggins Back to Normal

20th January 2015:
I'm so so so sorry I didn't review the last chapter, and I barely have time to write anything now. Please believe me when I say that they both made me cry with delight!
I love you!

Author's Response: Aw, never apologize to me Lobelia you are such a loyal reader! Aw, I'm glad you enjoyed them and I'm just glad to see your name pop up on my screen even if it's a huge essay length review or just a few short sentences!
Love you and hope everything is going well for you!

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Review #4, by dracodarlingxx Mission Complete

18th January 2015:
The ending is near?!
NO! But I'm actually happy in a way because it means that Brielle and Al getting back together is close, and I CAN'T WAIT!
Oh and how I loved this chapter ;)
Especially the part where Al was being cheeky and seductive . . . .oh wait, that was all the time :)
Please update soon xx
P.S you KNOW I'd love to read a Louis/OC :*

Author's Response: Yes it is!
I can't wait for that either!!!
Aw, thank you!
Al is always fun to write. Haha
I will!
Aw, thank you I can't wait to start writing it!

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Review #5, by KKB Mission Complete

7th January 2015:
Oh my gosh I absolutely love this!! Stayed up much much too late to read it - sure sign that it's amazeballs.

Cannot tell you how many times I busted out laughing over this!

I love it - keep writing!!

Yay you!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this! Aw, that's so sweet!

Thank you! That's the goal, haha.

I will!

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Review #6, by KKB Borrowing is not Stealing

6th January 2015:
Alright, you've got to continue. Obviously you already have but it doesn't hurt to reiterate the fact.

A couple of honest spelling mistakes.

Love your characters so far!

Yay you!!

Author's Response: Oh, don't you worry I am continuing!

Yep, I do have some of those!

Thank you!


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Review #7, by Celeste Mission Complete

5th January 2015:
I think we both know that I would be sticking around for a Louis/OC fanfic. BUT enough of that.

This chapter is what I've been waiting for absolutely love it finally they are all friends again. Oh I forgot about Albus oh well I'm sure that particular relationship will sort itself out eventually.

I think the chocolate trail was amazing how Dom didn't figure it out sooner is beyond me. But hey can't have them all I guess.

Louis is just a love able idiot. Got to love that kid and Fred and his teddy bear ah bless him.

Can't wait for the next update :)

Author's Response: I'm really glad to hear that! :)

Thank you so much for such a sweet review! I love writing this story and am so sad that it'll be over soon!

Thank you again for spending your time to drop by and tell me what you think! Much love and hope I can update soon for ya!

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Review #8, by howdoyounotlikeit Blueberry Pie

29th December 2014:
Well. It's been a while.

So I was re reading this story. (YES I LOVE IT THAT MUCH). And I couldn't help but notice that Jenna reminds me of Regina George from Mean Girls.

And I also noticed that me and Brielle are eerily similar. Like the brutally blunt part and the craziness. I have broken hearts in the past. More like made people feel hostile towards me.

Beautiful chapter. I don't especially like blueberries but BLUEBERRY PIE MUST BE GREAT.

While reading this chapter for the 3rd time (I didn't know what to say) I discovered that Brielle's spirit animal is Jennifer Lawrence. Think about it.


I think Al needs to be leaded on with. Then, he will get an idea. AND GET HIS CRAP TOGETHER.
I'm okay with the idea that Al has a big romantic gesture.

Anyway, it's kinda weird how Scorp is dating the cousin of his best friends. Like if he wants to talk about doing the dirty, he can't. Because he would talking with Rose's cousins. And that's weird.
Goodness I'm awkward.

Peace and Love kids.


Goodbye for realisies.

Author's Response: It has been a while.

(Ah! That is so sweet!) I can't agree more with that statement. She really does remind me of her as well!

Well if you are similar to Brielle then you and I must be long lost twins! It's nice to know you can relate!

I don't like blueberries or blueberry pie but I had a gut feeling the boys would!

I've thought about it. I agree. Jennifer Lawrence you are Brielle Patil. Congrats.


Al must get his stuff together. Soon. Hopefully. Please. A romantic gesture will happen and he won't get what he wants as easily as he wishes so don't worry.

Awk. I agree.

Love and peace kids.


Thank you!

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Review #9, by kcool Blueberry Pie

13th December 2014:
This was cute :) Excited for the next chapter :) Merry Christmas in advance fellow Indian.

Author's Response: Aw! Thank you so much! Merry Christmas to you too but I'm not actually Indian haha.

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Review #10, by JustanotherHarryPotterfan3816 Blueberry Pie

7th December 2014:
You. Are. Amazing.
This story is amazing.
B is amazing.
End of review.


Author's Response: Aw, this is so cute!
Stop, you are the amazing one!
B is amazing though too.l

Thank you for the review!!

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Review #11, by Lobelia Sackville-Baggins Blueberry Pie

3rd December 2014:
Okayyy, no more sugar for me...
And Bri? You might not want to destroy Al's manhood. Something tells me that you'll have need of it in the future.
And that, ladies and gentlemen, is about how vulgar as my humor gets. Savor it.
And really, is it that unreasonable? I mean, they ARE getting married and having children, and since Amazon doesn't deliver babies yet.yeah, time to move on.
I am SO glad! Time for fight for Dom! WHOHO! You know, for some reason, this site always cuts out extra letters once the comment is posted, so that probably just looks like "whoho" right now. *sigh*
Louis is the best, isn't he? The absolute best.
And I love how Scorp just rolls with it and is all "hiya, Betsy!" And the other two cringing at "is that was Rose Weasley is into?" made my day. HAH!
I wish you a speedy upload and a wonderful life!

Author's Response: Lobelia happy holidays and new year!!!
Passwords and armies are amazing!!
Deff no more sugar for me as well!
I think she will too - I'm seeing two kids in their future and considering I control their future I think I am correct. Practically a seer.
Moved on.
I actually only like apple pecan pie. And I hate blueberries. Ironic, I know.
Yes, go Dom! It does look like like whoho! Haha, I guess your whoho was too much for this site.
I love Lou. He's a babe.
I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
Aw, thank ya!

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Review #12, by Celeste Blueberry Pie

2nd December 2014:
OMG yes such an adorable chapter. Oh yeah they will be friends again. Thank god. Poor Dominique I feel sorry for her she had such a bad time finally got a friend and a dumb girl comes along and ruins it by lying and being a jealous Pratt. Gah.

'It all honesty, though, Louis is my favorite. Donít tell anyone because it will start a full-on war but there is something about him that I just love. Heís so freaking weird I love it!! I wanna frame him and put him in my room. A talking Louis portrait.' This I love this paragraph the most because I whole heartily agree and also would like a Louis so sign me up for one please. So adorable.

Can not wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Of course they will! Dominique does have it hard, you're right! Poor girl but she'll get her friends back soon enough.

Ah, Louis is one of my favorites as well! Most of my reviewers love him, it's rather funny. in your that's interesting! A talking portrait of Louis - he would probably pay to have it done!I loved writing that part so I'm glad you liked it.

Just submitted new chapter!

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Review #13, by Commander Beckett World War Weasley

27th November 2014:

So I just polished off your story in a day. LOL. I'm hooked, I can't wait for you to update it. AND OMG, I like how your story deviates from the Wotter norms.

I hope BRIBUS happens, I ship them so hard. >.<

Albus is such a ...turd. And I can't wait to see how Brielle and Dominique get their friendship back.

I really LIKE this story. :C Please update it when you can! :D

Author's Response: Wow!

That's a lot of reading you must have done. I'm so glad you're hooked! That's a really nice thing to say, it makes me feel great as the writer. What are the Wotter norms? Haha - perhaps I just wasn't aware of them but regardless, thank ya!

We all ship them, girly! It's a hard and difficult ship. *sigh*

Albus is a beautiful turd though. That will be in the next upcoming chapter(s), so get ready!

Thank you so much! An update is waiting for validation rn!

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Review #14, by Celeste Victory or Vicotire

25th November 2014:
Oh this chapter now makes the other chapter make more sence.
Hah I love Scorp and adore James and Freddy. Also Louis I love how you have written him. Where can I get me one Louis. I need one in my life.

Anyways awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, I figured it would help, haha.
I'm glad you like them! Louis is one of my favorites! When I finish IT I'm thinking of writing a Louis/OC story.

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Review #15, by WottersAreHotter Victory or Vicotire

23rd November 2014:
No!!! I wanted the next chapter :'(
I was definitely a bit confused when the last..or should I say next chapter, started but I didn't think too much about it! When are you gonna be posting the 41st chapter??

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry!
Next chapter coming very soon - it's being validated rn!

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Review #16, by madness World War Weasley

17th November 2014:
This is such am amazing story, even if everyone is more than a tad crazy! Looking forward to an update :)

Author's Response: So sweet! Thank you!

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Review #17, by Celeste World War Weasley

11th November 2014:
Aw I feel so bad for Dom poor girl. Jeeze I'm supprised Teddy is with Victorie after all that. Ahhh well her friends were horrible for doing that. Yeah Bri fight for Dom do it do it do it. At this point I don't even care if she ends up with Albus aslong as her friendship with Dom gets back in track I am all good.

Author's Response: I would like to start this off by saying I posted the wrong chapter and there is a chapter that goes before this that I just submitted so hopefully it'll be up soon!!

Aw, I know it's all a bit rough but I'm glad you like everything! Dommy will be coming back (:

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Review #18, by Lobelia Sackville-Baggins World War Weasley

8th November 2014:
Okay. Now that that's over with...
Seriously, though. Go you. Go Bri. Go Dom, and even Go Victoire for acknowledging how wrong she was and doing her part in protecting her little sister now, no matter how messed up things got before.
I wonder who's in the army? James and Freddy, I imagine, and Leslie and Amelia, obviously. Louis, I bet -- he'd want to help his sister. And even though I wish I could say I was confident about Al being in the army just now...I'm not. Not at all. But he will be one day, I'm sure of it. Perhaps this is what it will take for everything to be resolved. No clue how, but Al and Bri will find a way.
And are strong. You are all strong! People, you are all strong! Do not let nasties whose names have been modified (read: improved) by Brielle Patil get in your way!
I am actually jumping up and down right now. That has to stop.
but now. If you'll excuse me, I have a long essay to write. Darn it, Mark Twain!!
Just kidding. Love you, sir!
Love you!

Author's Response: Have to start this off by saying I posted the wrong chapter - ugh. There is a chappie before this that I just submitted which will be posted as the correct chapter 39 hopefully soon!!
Haha the army is being enlisted right now!
Good luck with your essay girly!!

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Review #19, by happyanon World War Weasley

7th November 2014:
FINALLY. well I said finally for many reasons. One, AN UPDATE. Two, the story behind Vicky and Dom catfight. And can I just say, Victorie is one Class A bi-tch. Who does that to their 11 year old sister? That's so effed up. Like wow seriously.. damn. I feel sad for 11 year old Dominique having to go thru all of that.. its heartbreaking. Im glad Brielle is gonna fight for Dom now. Hope for more updates to come. Xoxo

Author's Response: First off, like to start by saying I posted the wrong chappie by accident! There is one before this that I just submitted that will be approved within the next four days as the correct 39th chapter so look forward to it!

I can't agree with you more! It really is! Now we all know what Dom really went through. An update is on it's way!

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Review #20, by Fonzzx World War Weasley

7th November 2014:
Ok so I'm ECSTATIC at finally finding out what Victoire did, but I'm a little confused as to how Brielle ended up in McGonagall's office in the first place. At the end of the last chapter she and Louis had detention but there was no mention of them being sent to McGonagall.

Author's Response: First off, like to start by saying I posted the wrong chappie by accident! There is one before this that I just submitted that will be approved within the next four days as the correct 39th chapter so look forward to it!

^^ So that should help explain what happened! Totally my bad I didn't realize until I read this review that I had messed up so sorry!!

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Review #21, by howdoyounotlikeit World War Weasley

7th November 2014:
I didn't expect that. At all.
I was expecting a one to one conversation between Mr. Potter and Miss Patil.
But damn...
The thing about this plot with Dom and Victoire is that it's believable.
An older sibling would do anything to get the attention back. Trust me, I would know.

Now is Dom a 6th year or a 7th year? Because she lives in the 6th year dorm but didn't fail a year. I think.

This chapter hit me where it hurts. IN THE FEELS. I almost started to cry. I'm not a crier.

I think Dom and Brielle would be great as friends. Again.
Their personalities fit somehow and Dom needs to bring her barriers down.
Plus, Brielle needs an unbiased Wotter family member when she and Al starting doing whatever they will be doing *insert smirking emoji*

Oh yea a correction. This sentence:
Dominique has been hurt enough in her past to not take a friendship for granite
"granite" should be "granted"
It's nice to know that people like Jenna existed before Jenna #notactuallynicetoknow
I apologize for the hashtag.

Peace and Love kiddos.

That didn't feel good.

Peace and Love kids.

Author's Response: First off, like to start by saying I posted the wrong chappie by accident! There is one before this that I just submitted that will be approved within the next four days as the correct 39th chapter so look forward to it!

Oh my! That would be an interesting convo!!
Yeah, I know, I'm the middle child so we always fight to get noticed haha.

She's a seventh year that lives in the sixth year dorm!

Stop!! Please don't cry, girly.

They will be soon. Hopefully.
Yes, I agree!
Haha - I'm dying.

Oh my! You are totally right, haha. My bad.

Thank you so much!


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Review #22, by Lobelia Sackville-Baggins The Weasley that Could

2nd November 2014:
I'M HERE, I'M HERE! I'M SO SORRY, BUT THIS IS THE FIRST MOMENT I COULD SPARE! This review is going to be uncharacteristically short, so I hope you can find it in you to forgive me.
HOLY SHIT, RUN, BRI, RUN! Lol, "you were there the whole time?!"
All my love to you and the whole gang. I know, I know, I said the review was going to be short, but not THIS short! But I don't think I can manage. I hope you understand. I just wanted to make sure you knew that I hadn't abandoned you.

Author's Response: I just updated, you lucky ducky! Hopefully it'll be validated soon! I don't mind a short review as long as I get to hear from you girly! I know - a marauders map. They are so daft sometimes. Byyyeee! Loved hearing from you girly. Hope school is treatin gyou well! xx

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Review #23, by dracodarlingxx The Weasley that Could

31st October 2014:
The chapter looks fine :)
Bloody hell, I miss Al. He's honestly such a sweetheart - a moody, sassy, slightly arrogant sweetheart, but still brilliant. AND BRIELLE KEEPS RUNNING AWAY (but I understand why, cos come on, if a guy broke my heart like that, I would be no where near as awesome or brave as she's being). You know, if he really wanted to, he could corner that girl. But I guess she's honestly got the legs of a cheetah.
And Brielle is so back to her old self :) except for the lack of Al. She needs Al.
And Al may be beautiful, but Louis is the number 1 honey.
please update soon x

Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I know I miss writing the funny Al so much. He is such a wonderful guy and I can't wait to write him again. She really is pretty fast, ya know.
Al is the reason for everything.
I love Louis as well! I'm thinking of writing a fanfic for him once I finish this one up, which will sadly be soon. Would you like that?

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Review #24, by Celeste The Weasley that Could

25th October 2014:
Ever since I started this story and dom was first mentioned I've really wanted to know what happened to her in her first year.

Can not wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Just posted it!


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Review #25, by easy2500 The Totem Pole

24th October 2014:
hey I hope you don't mind but do you mind if you tell me who the cast on the story so far I got naya for brielle Logan lerman for album joe Jonas for James but who is jenna greengrss

Author's Response: I've changed a few so here ya go!
Naya - Brielle
Logan Lerman - Albus
Francisco Lachowski - James
Lilly Allen - Lily Potter
Julia Johansen - Rose Weasley
Lasse Pederson - Hugo Weasley
Ava Jogia - Fred Weasley
Frita Gustavvson - Dominique
Wynston Shannon - Louis
Freya Mavor - Jenna Greengrass
Liu Wen - Leslie
Barbara Palvin - Amelia

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