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Review #1, by EnigmaticEyes16 Chapter 1

1st August 2015:
HI TAMMI! This is technically my 500th review according to my author page, even though when you click on that it will say 499 but oh well. Still counting it.

I loved this first chapter! I love the different, not-drunk-all-the-time Theo and I'm curious to learn more about Blaise, too. I like that Theo and Blaise aren't following in Malfoy's footsteps to become Death Eaters. And I like how Theo straight up calls Malfoy a worthless human being and says he shouldn't even be on the train. Although to be honest, I think it would have been obvious the Death Eaters had taken over Hogwarts already if Malfoy is on the train. Why else would they let them return, because Snape is in charge, duh! lol, just kidding. Clearly, they are all very much in the dark about just how far the Death Eaters have gone to get into Hogwarts.

But I'm very curious to see where this story leads. Especially with Neville overhearing Theo on how much he hated Malfoy and the Death Eaters and was angry that Dumbledore was dead. I wonder what Neville will do with that information. And when does Lavender come in? I'm very curious to see.

Anyway, great first chapter! I hope you come back to this and update sometime!


Author's Response: YAY!! 500th review! congratulations!

Yeah, this Theo is very different to my other Theo, this one is more serious. I always imagined Theo and Blaise to be the ones against the war, and the ones that would hate the idea of being Death Eaters.

Yep, they're all very much in the dark about what's going to be happening at the school, especially Theo who spent his summer practically alone.

I am going to update this as soon as I can, I have the next chapter pretty much written, it just needs padding out a little.

Thank you so much!

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Review #2, by rozen_maiden Chapter 1

5th August 2013:
I'm so glad I checked this out for the review tag! I've never seen a Slytherin story like this before - every story (and yes, I'm guilty for it), as had Theo, and/or Blaise good friends with Draco, so it's really so interesting to read this. It's incredibly dark, and intense, and Theo's interactions with Draco really had me surprised - they were so harsh. Yet, you wrote it so well, it was fitting. I particularly loved this sentence:
"You may not get it, as your pretty little head has been protected by daddy all these years, but have a good long chat with your precious Draco here and find out exactly what itís like to be controlled by him"
- That was so chilling and very well-written. Thank you so much for this brilliant read. You are an excellent writer, and I hope to see an update :)
- Mahalia

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you have as well! :D I wanted to have a story with a difference, I imagined that not everyone in Slytherin would agree with what Draco had done.
I'm so so happy that you've enjoyed this so much, I wanted it to be a darker story as it's set around the time of the final battle. The Slytherins all think that they'll be safe, but lets hope that they listen to Theo's words.
Thank you so very much for your fantastic review! You're so amazing! I'm writing the second chapter at the moment, so let's hope that I finish it soon. :D

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Review #3, by AlexFan Chapter 1

3rd June 2013:
Hello! Sorry that I got to reviewing this so late but I'm finally here to review your entry!

Anyway, I enjoyed reading this, I've never read a story that was told from the point of view of a minor character and set during the seventh year. You don't get to read much stories about what it was like at Hogwarts while Harry was on the run so this was something new.

Anyway, I really liked it (and because I'm not here to give constructive criticism, I'll just leave all of that out). I think you used the quote that I gave you really well, it really fit into the scene and what was happening and the dialogue.

Thanks for entering my challenge!

Author's Response: That's fine! :D I'm late replying to it. :P

I'm glad that you enjoyed reading this story. I wanted to have a story that featured Theo in it, and this idea came up and it fitted with the quote in your challenge. :D

I'm so glad that you liked it, Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and for the great challenge!

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Review #4, by TheHeirOfSlytherin Chapter 1

27th May 2013:
Go, Theodore! Gah, I love you more and more every time I read a story with you in it, good or bad. And I definitely see good Theo here. To stand up to Draco and publically (sort of) deny wanting anything to do with Voldemort and the Death Eaters. For a Pureblood that's braver and more dangerous than any other, especially when others in your family are part of that side.

AND NEVILLE HEARD. Neville can be there if he needs someone to trust in the school, beside Blaise. I'm glad he has Blaise.

Ooh, this was so awesome and exciting, Tammi. I'm so excited for more!!!


Author's Response: Oh Theo! I love him so much! I think that Theo love just grows every time that we see him around. Theo is very good in this story, there's no bad Theo here.

YES! NEVILLE HEARD! Neville is so going to be there with Theo and Blaise.

Thank you so much for the review Sam! I shall write more soon! :D

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