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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by because i write Muggle Inventions

9th October 2013:
I really like the concept and basic plot line of this story. I would love to see it developed a little more. I really think you could have a great fanfic if you drew out the scenes a little longer and added more detail. The chapters seem short, but I -again- really love the idea behind this.
Maybe when you update the typos, consider expanding a little bit.

Author's Response: Hey thanks for the feedback!

Yeah that sounds like a good idea trying to expand it a little. Its my first fanfic so I am still getting the hang of it. As next week I will have a proper computer again, (not just an iPad :D ) and will be able to edit some and hopefully fix my story :)

I really wanted to write a Draco/Hermione but I didnt want to make anyone the 'bad guy' :)

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Review #2, by edjwha Muggle Inventions

22nd July 2013:
this is so sudden...i like it. the story is really good so far...please update asap!!!

Author's Response: Haha i am so sorry it has taken so long. I havent had internet for awhile and forgot all about my story haha. I will keep writing!! :) Thanks for reading!

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Review #3, by a fan Endings

25th May 2013:
this looks like it could be a good story..until next chapter...

Author's Response: Thank you :) I will keep writing and updating :)

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Review #4, by Hopper Endings

25th May 2013:
i like it so far c: can't wait til the dance at the wedding... !

Author's Response: Thank you :)
Its coming! Just making the finishing touches and then will he up for validation :)

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