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Reading Reviews for The Return of the Elves
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MsErrol Prologue

21st October 2013:
I really love it! You have a great voice in writing and it sounds really good seeing as you are comparing two completely different writing styles with J.K and Tolkin. Really Great

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Review #2, by Jana Bohlinger All That We Are

13th September 2013:
this is great! whens the next chapter comming?

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Review #3, by looneylizzie Delayed Satisfaction; Answers Forthcoming

2nd June 2013:
I have to say, I was seriously wary of how a story like this would go, but I've been pleasantly surprised! I'm a HUGE LOTR fan as well as HP, and so I was really interested to see how one would combine the two Universe's. I have to say, you've done really really well! :D

On teeny tinyy piece of advice... spread things out a little bit! It's way easier to read all of the dialogue if you spread it out. I mean, its already just fine... just don't be afraid of the return button okay? A huge paragraph is loads harder to read on a screen ;)

And one last piece of awesomeness... I'm totally LOVING the way you're incorporating the two different mythologies! I'm really excited to see Legolas and Haldir meet the Wood Elves. I'm seriously dying to know what the connection is! Please! Go into details as how the LOTR mythology and the HP mythology mix! Its absolutely fascinating!

And Legolas and Hermione? Now there's one I'd NEVER have thought of. Keep going! Can't wait for more!

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