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Review #1, by AllisonFayeLovesHarryPotter A New Man

5th June 2013:
Much, better, there is still a few typos..

Author's Response: I am aware, I suck at this type a thing...

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Review #2, by lovethepotters A New Man

23rd May 2013:
I'll be your first reviewer! I know how hard it is to get them so I thought I'd oblige :)

Is it a deliberate decision for James to have blue eyes in your story? According to JKR, James had hazel eyes (sorry, I'm nit-picking I know, just couldn't help but ask)! Overall good job, and hopefully deliver a longer chapter next time round haha :P

Also, I'm writing a story: A Pot of Lillies, mind checking it out for me? :) Thanks and congrats again on your first chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks a billion!!! I knew it said somewhere he had a different eye color but I couldn't find it so I went with blue. I don't mind the nit-picking. And I will check out your new story!

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