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Review #1, by MargaretLane on the art of reluctant explanations

10th August 2013:
Oh, Molly! That really was extremely thoughtless, going out drinking with another friend the night before your best friend's wedding. *shakes head disapprovingly*

I really don't blame her friend for being annoyed.

And yes, the story is interesting and definitely makes you want to read on. The chapters are short, but I think that fits the story well. Molly's way of speaking just seems to work well with short chapters.

Author's Response: Yes, dispproval all round!

Neither do I, Molly really does deserve being yelled at, aha.

Thank you, I did make it so that the chapters were short on purpose.

Cheers, SW.


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Review #2, by MargaretLane on the art of selective explanations

10th August 2013:
One thing here that didn't make much sense to me is the part in brackets about "well, I say flat". I don't really understand what she means by that.

And hmm, her best friend is a Muggle. Interesting. It'll be interesting to see their relationship.

Hard to tell yet whether Molly is a good person or not. So far she seems unbelievably irresponsible and thoughtless, but whether she has a justifiable reason for what she's done or not, we don't really know yet. She SOUNDS like a good person. Like I said, you characterise her quite well just by her word choice and she comes across as likeable, but there's still a lot more to find out before I can really judge.

Author's Response: Yeah, that part probably needs emphasising/explaining. She means that it's not really a flat, but she calls it a flat.

Molly is interesting... all I'm saying...

Cheers, SW.


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Review #3, by MargaretLane on the art of blathering like an idiot

10th August 2013:
I really like the first paragraph of this story. Since it's Harry Potter, it has you wondering for a moment if the character is speaking literally or metaphorically.

I also think you portray the character's voice very well. I can almost hear her, particularly when she says she does know how long 17 years is. Very good characterisation.

Yeah, missing your best friend's wedding is pretty bad. I can understand why her friend would kill her.

Author's Response: Thank you! Molly is a good character to write :) . Missing your friend's wedding - I think it's understandable if she /does/ kill her!

Cheers, SW.


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Review #4, by miluv on the art of being wholly guilty

16th June 2013:
I love it so far, my only advice would be to lengthen your chapters, theyre a bit too short haha:) but other than that I love your storyline and everything. keep it up!
xox miluv

Author's Response: Thanks :3
Can't really lengthen my chapters as it's all written up and edited and everything.
They are a bit short, but I wanted it that way.
Thank you, the story plot does improve (haha...SPOILERS)!
Cheers, SW.


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Review #5, by miluv on the art of selective explanations

14th June 2013:
I LOVE THIS. OMG. OKAY. I'm actually reading this on my break from finals studying, so have to get back to it, but this was amazing:D
xox miluv

Author's Response: Thank you!!! Really brightened my day :3
Good luck with your finals!
Thanks for reviewing!
Cheers, SW.


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Review #6, by Ecm20 on the art of blathering like an idiot

20th May 2013:
I like the sound of this story and im already intrigued!!! Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :) ! Keep reading, it gets more interesting.
Cheers, SW.


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