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Review #1, by .... Chapter 37: Anthony

6th August 2017:
Will you be posting more of this story?..

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Review #2, by Abbi Chapter 37: Anthony

31st July 2017:
Hi! I discovered this fic a while ago and I must have now read it a good 4 times. I love it and I just want to know- will it ever be finished? It's such a good, unexpected coupling and story, and i really hope that one day it will be brought to its conclusion. Again, it's amazing and you are a great writer. :)

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Review #3, by Kristen Chapter 37: Anthony

4th November 2016:
Oh my gosh! What happens next?!

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Review #4, by PotterAddict Chapter 37: Anthony

8th July 2016:
Hey this is really good so far. A couple things about it are bugging me though. The first one is grammatical. You use the word say when you should use sitting a lot. For example "Hermione was sitting with Harry" instead of "Hermione was sat with Harry." the second is I find myself skimming over some parts because you go on and on about the twins charm or how George thinks Hermione is perfect and it's getting a bit overdone. I know it's supposed to be a love story between them, but you don't have to say the same thing over and over to prove that. I really do like the story though and I'm interested ing his Anthony Goldstein plot. I hope Matt can make it better between Hermione and George after the big fight I feel is coming. You're doing great.

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Review #5, by Dingo055 Chapter 37: Anthony

7th April 2016:
Yes it's been a long time, It is amazing to see how well this chapter is written! Although I am very late, I hope your doing well and don't leave this story abandoned!
I look forward to another chapter!
, Dingo

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Review #6, by Scriptie Chapter 36: Do You Trust Me?

5th March 2016:
I really don't like Anthony. He should quit meddling with Hermione when she's clearly happy with George. Hermione should have addressed it to George but she doesn't want to worry him I bet. Fantastic writing as always Jenna! Looking forward to your next update no matter how long it takes :)

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Review #7, by DracoGal Chapter 37: Anthony

21st January 2016:
I hate Anthony. That is all.

I'm so sorry I haven't left any comments recently! I really do love this story and I cannot wait to read more!!

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Review #8, by Cashley Chapter 36: Do You Trust Me?

28th September 2015:
Please, for the love of God, continue with this story!!! I'm dying to know what happens. I really hope you don't abandon it. Some of my favourite fics have been abandoned and I just can't take any more! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Oh you're so sweet... I just posted the new chapter so hopefully you'll read it and enjoy it. Thanks for the review! Jenna :)

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Review #9, by Dingo055 Chapter 36: Do You Trust Me?

21st July 2015:
Another great chapter even if im reading it over 2 months after It was posted

Author's Response: doesn't matter who was here first. It only matters who will be here until the very end. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the review.
Jenna :) x

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Review #10, by seriously_lovin_sirius Chapter 36: Do You Trust Me?

12th May 2015:
Another great chapter, of course! I just so wish it was longer :-). Ugh, Anthony is just a D-. Seriously, I couldn't tolerate it myself!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. Anthony really is... maybe he gets better? Or maybe he gets worse? Thanks again for the lovely review.
Jenna :)

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Review #11, by dancerinliverpool Chapter 36: Do You Trust Me?

27th April 2015:
When is the next one??? Needing to read it ASAP!!!😃😃😀😀

Author's Response: Just posted! Sorry I disappeared for such a long time. Thanks so much for the review! Jenna :) x

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Review #12, by seriously_lovin_sirius Chapter 35: Not A Problem

4th April 2015:
Hey, I just read your entire story today. I enjoy it very much. My only critique is done of your spelling and grammar errors. I think a beta reader would be helpful. Keep up the writing!

Author's Response: Wow, all in one day? With 35 chapters I have to say that's quite impressive! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm really glad that you like the story. Thank you for the honest and constructive criticism. A beta is something I probably should have considered a long time ago. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I hope you continue to read and enjoy the story.
Jenna :) x

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Review #13, by Dingo055 Chapter 35: Not A Problem

25th January 2015:
I don't know how but these chapters just keep getting better and better, surely a result of all your hard work.
Keep up the great work!
Cya in the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much as always for the kind review and all of the endless encouragement. I'm sorry that there has been such a long wait for the next chapter but it will be up soon I promise. Thanks a million for the lovely review, the support means the world to me. Jenna :)

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Review #14, by dancerinliverpool Chapter 35: Not A Problem

21st January 2015:
when is the next chapter up? i really like the story and the plot. i would really like to see a bit of a rivalry between George and Anthony. also maybe oliver wood could turn up and try to get with hermione by seriously injuring george or even kidnapping him. thanks for writing and i hope evrything in your personal life is good.

Author's Response: Hi. Wow...I've been gone for an extremely long time. I'm really sorry. The next chapter will be up soon and I really am sorry for the wait. Thanks for the lovely and supportive review, you're incredibly sweet and I really appreciate it! I will definitely take your ideas into account...who knows what's around the corner ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Jenna :) x

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Review #15, by Jaye14 Chapter 34: Two Families

5th January 2015:
Love.. Love.. Love this story. Cannot wait to read more of it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Jaye! I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story and I really appreciate the kind review. Thanks again! Jenna :) x

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Review #16, by A-girl-with-ideas2000 Chapter 34: Two Families

2nd January 2015:
But I canít so I will do it here,
Hermione and George get pregnant accidentally, leave out the sex though. Then due to muggle rules it states that muggles must be married before the couple has children. Then, around two, three months during pregnancy George buys the ring and proposes whenever. And she says yes! They get married seven months in and yeah and the child is born and it is Rose (her first actual childís name). Just an idea, you do NOT have to use this but if you do please do a mention, thanks please update soon!

Author's Response: I have to say I'm reading your reviews and in my mind your tone is literally buzzing with energy and enthusiasm and it's actually really nice! Wow...I don't know what to say but I'll start with a massive thank you- THANK YOU for the kind reviews. Next, I'd have to say wow. I would be lying if I said that your plot doesn't interest me because it truly sounds clever and unique and I so appreciate the thought you put into the suggestion but I do have a very slight frame of what's to come in the story in my head already. Please don't take this as a criticism or rejection, I honestly love your idea and if I didn't already know where I was going with the story I would definitely do it but it's just not what I had planned.
I don't mean to sound like I'm telling you what to do but you're clearly a very imaginative person and I'm sure you could write this story yourself. Why don't you give it a try? I'd love to read it, if you do.
Again, I just want to thank you so much for the thoughtful reviews and I really appreciate the idea. Jenna :) x
PS. If you have more suggestions or if you ever want to talk I am on the HPFF forums under the same penname!

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Review #17, by A-girl-with-ideas2000 Chapter 34: Two Families

2nd January 2015:
Hello, I'm going to pitch you an idea on your accounts homepage it may take more than one comment though. I beg of you please continue on this story I have been reading it so much thank you I will use the same name so look for me please thank you!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much A-girl-with-ideas2000 (although addressing you like that sounds awfully impersonal!) The story will continue I promise I'm just so bad with regular updates! Thanks for the lovely review, Jenna :)

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Review #18, by Sam Chapter 34: Two Families

30th December 2014:
omg please update I love this story so much!!!

Author's Response: The update is on the way! Thank you so much for the kind review, I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. Jenna :)x

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Review #19, by Dingo055 Chapter 34: Two Families

23rd December 2014:
This is yet another very well done chapter. Lots of thought must of gone into this chapter to capture the two families interactions. A very good author must have done this chapter. Thank-you for another great chapter cya later!

Author's Response: A very sweet, thoughtful, kind and supportive reader must have left this review! ;) Thank you so much for yet another lovely review. I'm so glad that you liked it and that you're still enjoying the story. Thank you for the endless encouragement and kindness, it means the world to me. Until the next time! Jenna :)

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Review #20, by Manda95 Chapter 18: I Love You

1st December 2014:
I already commented already on one of the chapters, but I am going to comment again. I started reading your story on Thanksgiving, and I finished it that day. This is the chapter that I read over and over again. The relationship between George and Hermione is so real and authentic; I want that someday with someone. Its beautiful. I just had to comment on this chapter. Your an amazing writer. I will always comment and say how awesome this writing is. If I could hug you I would :). Thank you for writing. I hope if I ever have the courage to start writing and putting my work out there that I will be as great as you. Now its time for me to stop rambling. I had to comment on this chapter. Hope all is well.

Author's Response: Wow...the love and warmth I am feeling towards you right now is unbelievable! You are way way way too kind and I cannot express in words how much I appreciate the lovely, supportive reviews. Being a Brit, I don't celebrate Thanksgiving but nevertheless I hope you had a great day and enjoyed yourself. I am so glad that you like the story and my writing so much, it honestly means the world that you think so highly of it. I completely agree with you, I would love to have such a strong and loving bond with someone like these two do. Aw I promise you I am sending you about a thousand virtual hugs right now- this has made my day and put a smile on my face. Thank you for reading and reviewing, there's no need for you to thank me! I hope that you do find the courage and motivation to start writing and put your work out there because I would be privileged to read it. I'm on the forums here under the same penname if you ever want to get in touch to talk about writing (or anything else for that matter!) This was not rambling, this was one of the sweetest reviews ever and I am so grateful to you. This has been a major confidence boost and it is just simply amazing to have heard from you again with so much praise and positivity, I cannot thank you enouch, Manda.
Thanks a million for the absolutely beautiful review and I assure you that after this review, things are a hundred times better than 'well'.
Thank you and thank you once more.
Jenna :) x

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Review #21, by Manda95 Chapter 34: Two Families

30th November 2014:
Can I say wow :). Until reading your story I have never been a Hermione/ George shipper. This story is amazing. Im absolutely in love with the characters and the development of their love story. Its beautiful. So keep on writing. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so so so so much for the review, you are so sweet and kind. Oh wow, well I'm glad I could help you to like this ship-it really is one of my favourites.Thank you so much the characters love all of you readers too (Honestly they told me themselves!) Thanks a million for the lovely review and I hope you continue to read and enjoy the story. Jenna :) x

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Review #22, by Scriptie Chapter 34: Two Families

29th November 2014:
Fantastic as always Jenna! I think the meeting went over rather well. I despise Anthony for liking Hermione and brushing off the fact that she has George...UGH it drives me mad that he does that. Anyways This story is my favorite and I'll be looking forward to your next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks a million, Scriptie! It makes me smile just seeing your name on a review. The meeting did go well but remember nothing is ever as it seems. Anthony is annoyingly nice when he wants to be but very dismissive of George and Hermione's relationship (obviously that's the way I've chosen to write him) and so I can see where your dislike for him has come from. Thank you very much for the lovely review and I look forward to hearing from you again.
Jenna :) x

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Review #23, by Amira Chapter 34: Two Families

29th November 2014:
This is honestly the best story I've yet to find on this site! The way that you developed the characters made me just want to keep reading, I loved the choices you made by keeping Fred alive and not sticking to the hermione and Ron thing. That pair always bothered me. Although this is my first review of your story I have been reading it since the beginning and love it! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hi Amira, it's so lovely to hear from you and your name is beautiful I have a close friend who has the same name, I love it. Aw you are far too kind and I really appreciate such a supportive and sweet review. Thank you so much, I'm glad that you have been enjoying the story. I love Fred and George so much and George's character would change so much without Fred so I felt it was better to keep him alive. I love Ron, he's one of my favourite characters but I was never too fond of the pairing. Thank you so much for the absolutely brilliant review and I'm glad to know that you've been following it for so long. Thanks a million.
I hope you continue to read, review and enjoy the story.
Jenna :) x

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Review #24, by Scriptie Chapter 33: The New Job

25th November 2014:
Hey Jenna! Long time no read ha ha... I've terribly missed your writing and picking up on reading it again was like I haven't stopped reading it at all. I LOVE this story so far!!! It has more of Hermione and George as a couple and acting like a couple with all the public displays of affection. Your writing never ceases to amaze me. It is truly a gift you possess and it is beautiful along with being so smooth. Anyways, FANTASTIC job on this entire story this far and I look forward to reading it along with more of your stories that you might have written in my absence. I'll be back to review again :)

Author's Response: WOW! SCRIPTIE! You're back! Does this mean I can expect some brilliant new writing from you? Aw you're too sweet, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Yeah going from 'A Building Love' to this was really fun because like you say now I can write them as a real couple with all the kisses, cuddles and public displays of affection I like. Thank you so much, it means the world that you think so highly of my writing. Thanks Scriptie it's so lovely to hear from you and it was such a sweet review.
Thanks a million. Nice to have you back.
Jenna :) x

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Review #25, by Kirstie Chapter 33: The New Job

20th October 2014:
Loved it can't wait for an update :) xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely review, Kirstie. I hope you continue to enjoy the story and I appreciate your support. Jenna :)x

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