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Review #1, by MissMdsty Three Words

15th July 2013:
Hello there!

An interesting pairing to say the least. I've always felt that in this context, if it had to be one of the Marauders, Remus would have been a better match for her, what with the book smarts, and loyalty and such.

I like that you kept this story short and sweet and didn't go into very much detail regarding how he came back, or what happened in between the time he fell through the Veil and when he came back!
our grammar and spelling were good and the narrative had a nice flow to it! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing.

I didn't really want to go into detail about how Sirius returned as I thought it was irrelevant to the story. It was the fact that he had returned which was more important.


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