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Review #1, by BluebirdBrigade Call Me Astoria

15th July 2013:
Well...this was an extremely odd couple that I never would have picked to go together let alone have a affair with each other. But despite the fact that I was a bit like 'woah, did she just--and did he?' I actually really liked it...in a weird way. I usually like stories that are well written and this was definitely a good story.

I think you did extremely well with the dialogue as it can often be tricky for authors and you wrote very realistically, there was at no point in the story where I was like, 'yeah that would definitely have never been said'. You had a great balance of description and dialogue and I like the way you put the memory in italics - it was very clear. Very interesting story!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

I wouldn't have normally written this pairing, but when it came up in the pairings in the ficathon I just got this plot bunny and it wouldn't go away.


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