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Review #1, by milominderbinder Again

24th November 2013:
Hiya! Review tag.

This was honestly one of my favourite Rose/Scorpius oneshots I have ever read! It was so cute and sweet and funny and fluffy. It was well written, too - no spelling and grammar mistakes that I could spot, and your writing style is lovely, very clean and witty and easy to read and perfect for the tone of this story.

This is how I always imagine their relationship to be - tumultuous, on again off again, and difficult but also loving, and a little silly (like breaking up because of burnt eggs!). I thought you captured some great characters here which only made it better to read, you wrote Rose especially really well, and I loved her point of view.

Well done!

~Maia

Author's Response: Thank you for such an amazingly nice review.

I'm glad you really liked it. It was supposed to be a cute, romance kind of thing, and I did enjoy writing it. I had so many ideas for Rose/Scorpius, and they all kind of poured out. This is always how I imagine their relationship. I'm glad there weren't any writing mistakes - I tend to make those usually. I'm glad you liked my writing style as well.

I always like silly, complicated but overall sweet and romantic relationships. I like writing some versions of Rose as well, the sort of kooky, mad but still bookish one. I didn't want her to be too nerdy, Hermione ish, and I think I captured that well enough.

Thank you for the dead nice review.

~Frances


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Review #2, by Courtney Dark Again

30th June 2013:
Hey there!

First of all, I feel so terrible at how long it has taken me to get back to you. I probably shouldn't be making excuses, but my life suddenly got RIDICULOUSLY busy, largely thanks to a huge pile of schoolwork (sigh) and I just didn't have time for fanfiction, sadly.

But I'm back now, and all is right in the world! (Sorry. Ignore me - I'm not very modest.)

I really loved this one-shot! It was very cute and adorable and fluffy and by the end of it I had a big smile on my face. I think you used the quote very well - it certainly suited Rose's personality. I really liked how you characterized Rose, actually. I could definitely see a lot of Hermione in there but there was a bit of Ron...and something else that made her very individual, and unique.

I also have to admit that I have a soft spot for Scorpius and Rose, so this was a lot of fun to read. I also liked the nickname 'Roo'. I'm not sure I've ever heard that one before!

Thank you so much for entering the challenge! I will try and get out the results as soon as possible!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review. I completely understand with the busy thing, I keep meaning to update and its just impossible. I'm glad you liked the one shot. I was trying to sort of focus my attention on Rose's character mainly and I'm glad it came out well. I dont really know where Roo came from. I was just messing around I guess, thinking of shortened versions. And I had fun with the challenge so thankyou

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Review #3, by mrsronaldweasley262 Again

17th May 2013:
Oh my god, I loved it! Their relationship was so perfect and so much like what I always think they should be like.

Would you ever consider making it into a full story? Because I think it would be incredible and I would totally read it. Your writing was so good and flowed really nicely too.

10/10
mrsronaldweasley263

Author's Response: Thanks for the extremely cheerful review, it's always nice to get ones like this. I always thought their relationship would be complicated, and unsure, so I had fun writing this one shot. I think I will probably keep this story as a one shot, but may write another Rose/Scorpius story with the same relationship. :D ~F

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