5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ginnypotter242 Day 1

15th July 2013:
Oh Teddy... James and teddy were hilarious in this story. Teddy's hair changing was awesome and James'... Jamesness was just too cute. I liked how Teddy couldn't stand up against Pucey. But ooh, that line at the end of the introduction feast part. James quoting muggle literature? Well then...quoting it incorrectly as well, as I believe "wherefore art thou" means "why are you" not where. That's a very Jamesy thing to do though. i loved your characterizations of all of the characters. I really liked how Teddy did't want to be an Auror. It does seem very expected of him, and I liked the change in this story. Great story, it was very amusing!

~Sara

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Review #2, by logicismight Day 1

23rd June 2013:
it was just.BRILLIANT. no other word can describe it better.please go on with this story.Teddy was just as any HP fan can imagine him.

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Review #3, by Caroline Day 1

19th June 2013:
I love this story! :D Gave me a good laugh!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #4, by rogue_bludger Day 1

12th June 2013:
i really enjoyed this piece! you're a great writer and you managed to show, rather than tell, which made for a brilliant story.
however, that being said-
1. i'm not quite sure of prof. vector's gender in this (headmaster/she- which is it?)
2. The James in this story was a bit OOC considering the epilogue of DH. I can't really see him being that obnoxious. Maybe one of the female Weasleys, but James doesn't come off so Lavender-ish for lack of a better word.
That's just my two cents though. all in all, this was a great read :)
~M

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Review #5, by Holly_Mist Day 1

11th May 2013:
Haha i absolutely love Teddy here! He's just how i imagined him to be as a teacher at Hogwarts ^.^

OMG JAMES. He's just too adorable! I just wanted to go into your story and pull his cheeks and hug him really tight because he was that adorable! :D

I think you should make this into a short story collection! Then i can read more of adorable James ;)

Keep writing one-shots in the middle of the night! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing him :) I think Teddy would have just been a goofy guy, so I'm glad that came across.

JAMES IS A CUTIE PIE. I LOVE JAMES. The goal was definitely to make him act like an adorable little kid who's super-annoying but who you can't help but love :D

Haha, well, we'll see. Maybe.

I'll try! Thanks for the review :)


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