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Review #1, by DMsSlytherinPrincess Chapter One

12th July 2014:
What happens?! Does he say goodbye or not?!
This sucked me in right away, Draco drew me in, fast.
Loved that it was in his POV, well written not too fast paced and not dragging.

:I have to admit, I may have growled out loud, because at that moment everyone was looking at me."

That whole paragraph made me laugh, I read it over a few times, I enjoyed it lol. That and the conversation between him and Blaise, they both was true to character and I like how Pansy was mentioned.

My FAV part was Draco deciding his does have feelings for her, how hes clumsy oh and how he says her name out loud lol.
He was cute but in a Draco Malfoy way.
All in all I thought it was very great.

You ended it well tho I would have loved to know for sure what happened and that they stay together lol.

for the 2014 house cup review challenge

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Review #2, by Dark Whisper Chapter One

5th February 2014:

I don't normally ship Draco/Ginny (too involved with Dramione, I think, hehe), but thought I'd give it a go since I am a fan of Maroon 5. I mean, who doesn't love this song? LOL :D

This was an interesting take on them. I like it that she surprised him in so many ways. ;)

And my favorite line was also in your summary regarding how he had standards and she didn't meet them. Awe... It was actually a sad line for me.

He is clearly in turmoil here and honestly I love Draco in this light... undecided and second-guessing himself. On one hand there is his traditions and upbringing and on the other hand are feelings that he must face.

And can I say that I love her confidence, especially when telling him that she wasn't his? Perfect! It actually sounds like something that he would say to a girl and now he is getting a taste of it and it has a profound effect on him.

Great job!
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Hi Dark Whisper!

I know, right? It's an amazing song. I absolutely loved it :)
I am a big Draco/Hermione shipper myself but I generally love every story with Draco in it. It was different to write a Draco/Ginny story and to be honest, Dramione stories are a lot more fun :D

Your observations are so spot on. I was really going for the 'taste of his own medicine' kind of moments and to have her more confident than he was. I wanted her to be nothing like he expected and that it would make him unsure of himself and as you so well put it: second-guessing himself.

Thank you so much for your review!

- Lostmyheart

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Review #3, by Moonlightfaerae Chapter One

4th June 2013:
This was good, best one shot I've read

Author's Response: Thank you! :) So happy you liked it.

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Review #4, by darker side of happy Chapter One

21st May 2013:
Good story, I like the idea of Draco falling under the power of someone else without his or her intention.

Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm so happy you liked it :)

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Review #5, by iatevoldysnose Chapter One

13th May 2013:
This is such a cute one shot! I love it so much!
I love how you wrote Draco this makes you see beneath his ego and his title etc (if that makes sense).

It actually made me really sad at the end.


Author's Response: Haha LOL Thank you!
Yes it makes sense :b
The end is not a happy one but it still gives a little hope for the reader somehow - maybe they do end up together ? Who knows :) hehe

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