8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MrsJaydeMalfoy Hogwarts Again

1st August 2015:
Omg I can't! I just can't right now! *Dies*

Your descriptions are so hilarious and sarcastic! And, you've taken pretty much every reasony why a cliche is.. well.. cliche, and brought it to the forefront, and then explained it away as though it were nothing. Brilliant!

I really, really love this piece! You've got me smiling from ear to ear!

Well done, and going in the favs!!

Author's Response: Please see my last comments :p Seriously though, this was such a rubbish attempt at humour on my part, I think I'll stick to angst from now on LOL!

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Review #2, by MrsJaydeMalfoy Goodbye Hermione Granger

1st August 2015:
Hahahaha OMG. Dee this is amazing. It's so sarcastic and tongue-in-cheek, and I love the little inserts you made for things, like "lots of dots for dramatic effect", etc.

The whole 'non-romance' thing was hilarious also; I think my favorite line was when Ron 'thought Hermione and Harry were BFFs'... LOL.

This was so hilarious - I can't wait to see the next chapter!

Author's Response: OMG JAYDE, I AM CRINGING SO HARD RIGHT NOW. This is such an old story and I had honestly forgotten that it was on my AP until the House Cup when people reviewed it. I SWEAR MY WRITING HAS IMPROVED SINCE THIS!!

Thank you for the review anyway! ♥

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Review #3, by chantale Hogwarts Again

21st February 2014:
Weird...Not at all what we"re used to from you

Author's Response: Hah! I know, I know! This was for a parody challenge on the forums, I hope it hasn't put you off!

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Review #4, by Kacie Hogwarts Again

20th August 2013:
Omfg yes. Someone give her a clap!! That was awesome

Author's Response: Haha thank you!

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Review #5, by kidsy89 Hogwarts Again

15th July 2013:
This story was highly entertaining and made me giggle, quite a bit lol I especially loved the vague descriptions of Ginny and Luna's dresses and the constant emphasis on "platonic" and "bestest bff's" lol
loved the part at the end about the 7th yrs pairing off to have heated and passionate conversations lol
all the vague plot points and simple explanation of how she was adopted, which she has absolutely no issue with, and the fact that the grangers are just like ok whatever see ya around lol it was all very cleverly written, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Honestly this story was written about 1% for the challenge and 99% for my own amusement haha. I'm glad you enjoyed it!! Thanks for the review :)

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Review #6, by MargaretLane Hogwarts Again

27th May 2013:
The part about Luna and Neville being head over heels in like for each other amused me.

As does the constant repetition of "black and purple and gothic".

And uh, you've managed to include my absolute pet peeve when it comes to fanfiction. Using the word dormitory to describe something that clearly ISN'T a dormitory, but rather living quarters or something like that for the Head Boy and Girl. Then again you've included pretty much EVERYTHING that irritates people about fanfiction.

And the whole "we are incapable of using our magic or even just a lock to close the door when we're in the bathroom".

*cracks up* Ron likes Lavender best because she's best at pleasant conversation!

This actually reminds me of this short story I read once about an alternative universe where telling people your opinions was something you only did with somebody you really loved. "Do you want my opinion?", that's what it was called.

And the boys only said the girls looked "nice" because anything else might imply they were more than platonic friends! *laughs*

Author's Response: Haha, thank you very much for the review! I'm glad it amused you :) I'll definitely be looking up that fic, I love the AU/parody stories!

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Review #7, by MargaretLane Goodbye Hermione Granger

14th May 2013:
*cracks up at the whole idea that laws were being changed, Muggleborns freed and Hogwarts rebuilt, but Hermoine and Ron becoming Best Friends Forever was even more important than that*

*also cracks up at them going and enjoying their summer, completely ignoring all the people who'd died*

I'm also rather amused at the "vague plot point that involved the Dark Lord not liking girl babies or something".

And Hermione not being born around the same time as Harry instead of nearly a year earlier, just for story purposes.

Author's Response: Haha *cracks up at this review*!
Thank you very much :D I'm glad you found it funny, hope you enjoy the second chapter too!

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Review #8, by Lululuna Goodbye Hermione Granger

10th May 2013:
Hello! This is SO funny! I love how you combined the conspicuous lack of romance with the, er, poetic tale of Hermione/Mia. The idea of being B.F.Fs and the two pairs of B.F.Fs made me laugh, and was very clever!

Oh and I laughed out loud at the line "They were becoming... friends." It was so ominous! I could feel Hermione/Mia's tension and confusion! :P

The descriptions of the Zabinis were really funny, as well as Mia's new style. Who knew that getting a whole new identity came with a whole new sense of style? I also loved the bits about the huge dorm for the Heads, the Grangers not being at all bothered about the revelation of their daughter's true identity, and "Mione"/Mia writing her old B.F.F Ron how she's especially excited to see him. Oh, and the purple eyes.

Anyway, as you can probably tell I thoroughly enjoyed this and was laughing out loud for much of it. Great job!!! :)

Author's Response: Haha thank you very much! This was far too fun to write! It was supposed to be a one-shot but I got a little carried away and there's another chapter in validation...whoops!
I'm glad you liked it, I hope you enjoy the next chapter too :D

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