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Review #1, by ginnys twin A little fox spirit

25th May 2013:
Mysterious. I love the idea behind this. In less than 600 words, you've showed the problem, characters, setting, and a good portion of the background.

I would suggest adding in how old the fox spirit is in Human years. I would really like to know which year she will be in at Hogwarts.

I really like that you included China. When people think of magic they think of the London magic center. Or sometimes America. But never China. You are bringing Fanfiction to a whole new level!

I would suggest using "" instead of '' for when someone's speaking. It's just easier.

I also noticed that you're a bit new. Feel free to ask me any questions you may have!

Anyway, I can't wait for a new chapter because this is just so fascinating. Again, I love that you have such a perfect balance of the magic we know and the magic in this world you have created. I would like to know more about the fox spirits in later chapters. I really hope you continue this story! Don't give up!

-Krissy

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Review #2, by Glinda the Good Witch_xoxo A little fox spirit

12th May 2013:
Interesting so far. Can't wait for your later chapters. *Could you make it fast? hhehee.

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