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Review #1, by LilyEPotter Falling Down

6th March 2014:
You did a good job capturing Tom's viewpoint. You show the disconnect that he feels for others so that it can be easily seen. It's a wonder that no one else picked up on this flaw and only paid attention to his appearance. It's a very good thing that Albus was able to see who Tom really was, but perhaps that was helped by having been the one to tell Tom about his heritage and seeing the true Tom when the mask slipped just a little bit. Has Tom already begun to change his appearance? Was this why he stayed in the shadows? There must have already been rumors as the Ministry representatives were curious to see him, but how could they miss his lies? Incredible. What's even more incredible is the guilt he begins to feel when Tom looks through the letters they had written to each other.

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