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Review #1, by RavenclawWayToBe Where does the good go?

20th June 2013:
I really loved your story, my only critique would be that i wish it was longer! I loved the whole idea of Lily having a hidden and hard past that she hides behind because i think that she would try so hard to appear perfect that she would never let any weakness show, and i wish you had focused more on that! Maybe you could have shown more of her memories, more of her realization that she had to go back to James. But other than that, I absolutely loved it, the song was so great for your story and I loved the flashback and her character was so developed and I just overall loved it!!!

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Review #2, by Imogen Where does the good go?

3rd May 2013:
Aww this was really sad. I'd like to see the beginning properly to understand what was going on because I got the general gist but there wasn't really a whole lot to go off of, but yeah good first chapter! I'll happily read the rest when you continue :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know, I'll probably have to work on this a little more, since it's my first, but I really appreciate your feedback!

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