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Review #1, by potslicker The first step

2nd May 2013:
I love your start, got them together without a lot of fuss. You stated that when Harry and Ginny kissed for the first time, upon his awaking, that there was a deep red glow around them. Will be looking for an explanation later.

Your have setup Harry as a go getter and has a mind of his own, please keep his strong willed along with a strong willed Ginny. I don't care for him to be weak minded, especially around Ginny's brothers.

Looking forward to you next chapter and continuous story.

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