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Review #1, by Marmaladeduke Guilty As Charged

3rd November 2014:
I am completely addicted to your story and have binge read every one of your chapters like a possessed freak. I really, really want to read more so please update fast. It is really a wonderful plot and JAMES, ohmygod. Love this so much!

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Review #2, by PandaBird Guilty As Charged

11th October 2014:
Vibha!! Another BRILLIANT chapter! (though i'm still ahead of you :P)'Mike Litoris' xD I do so love your wit my dear. Update soon! :D

Author's Response: Som-Som! Thank you for reviewing with such flattering adjectives. It really does make my already quite big head, a tad more inflated. Unfortunately, you are still ahead of me but I will catch up, Sowmya. I will catch up!

As for my wit. It is of course as sharp and wonderful as usual, no surprise there!
I shall update as fast as humanely possible for the sake of all my, *ahem*, admirers.

Stay awesome.

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Review #3, by PandaBird The Precept Of Persuasion

25th September 2014:
Sh*t I spelt 'your' wrong what's wrong with me. now it's permanent and I will forever look upon it with shame.
Bring it up and you die

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Review #4, by PandaBird The Precept Of Persuasion

25th September 2014:
You're such an idiot for putting up Chapter 5 before me!! But it was brilliant and amazing and I can't wait for Chapter 6!
And I WILL be using a*shole-cas*erole' (bloody hpff) against you. You're own fault, because that's a getthu insult. Kalakku macchhi =D

Author's Response: Sowmya! Sorry about the late-ness of this response. It's been hanging about on my page so I decided to reply and finally get it over with. I'm so, so happy you like it but you're my sweetumsy fellow Sagmag and you are obliged to say nice things to me. Anyway, thanks for reviewing!


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Review #5, by lamentesteemed The Precept Of Persuasion

16th September 2014:
Oh god. This story is so AMAZING! Really. I found it while searching for fics to read and I'm just so amazed by its brilliance. I love chapter 1 and 5 and it's just, argh, so darn good. (I already said that but.)

I love the swear match and the microwave popcorn and the singing and the coconuts and everything. UPDATE FAST, PLEASE!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I feel really happy when people review but this is just a thing of beauty. I am so happy you like the chapter(s) so far. I'll try updating as fast as possible and just keep those chapters rolling!

Thank you for the lovely review, again.


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Review #6, by Leahrulez The Precept Of Persuasion

9th September 2014:
Hey, Leah here with your requested review,

I loved this chapter sooo much. It was brilliantly planned out and Rae is just the cutest although my favorite character of yours is Dom.

I really like James and Josh and everything. Coconut bras. That was really funny! Great plot. Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Hi Leah,

Thank you for such a sweet review. I'm really glad you like the plot and humour so far. I am trying to update as fast as possible, so just keep checking, yeah?


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Review #7, by Your best friend The Precept Of Persuasion

7th September 2014:

Author's Response: Ah, Nag. It must have been really good if you took the effort to review here. I am greatly flattered to know that you, pointer out of mistakes, liked chapter 5.
Much hugs and bunnies(because they're just so cute).

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Review #8, by Pandabird The Annual Quidditch Chorus

12th August 2014:
This is sooo BRILLIANT!! Amazing work, Vibha! Who knew you'd turn out to be such a genius eh? :D Good thing you didn't delete it, and update regularly, you great git.

Author's Response: SOWMYA! Ah yes, about time you reviewed. I'd say I know I'm a genius and I'm brilliant and I blind you all with my awesomeness but you might not review again so I'll shut up. Yeah. I'm glad I didn't delete it. That would have just been sad. Updates will happen when they happen. (Like you're one to talk! :P)

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Review #9, by Kira Good girls, Evil plans

7th August 2014:
Hey there! I stumbled across this fic while searching for candid James/OC's. I particularly liked your plot and hope you continue writing because all your chapters so far are very well written and planned out.
Just two questions, how many matches will there be in The League? And when will we find out both teams flyers?

Author's Response: There will be approximately twelve matches in The League and the team will be disclosed next chapter!
I'm thankful to the fates for making you stumble across this and grateful for making you like it as well! Thank you for reviewing!

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Review #10, by KC Good girls, Evil plans

1st August 2014:
I really like this story. It's original, fast paced and leaves you
wanting to read more!
I love Dom and my favorite line was about the Thailand yoga
instructor guy. :D :D
If I had any criticism it would be to refine Fred, as a character
a bit more but that's just my opinion.
Update fast!

Author's Response: Fred. Ah, Fred will grow on you eventually but I will take your criticism into account. I'm glad you like it!

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Review #11, by diamondmoon Good girls, Evil plans

25th July 2014:
Loved this chapter c:

Is James' journal like a diary or is it just for random stuff to be written down? Cause I have this theory that Rae reads in the journal that James secretly likes her. O: That would be the greatest plot twist. Love James and Rae =D

Author's Response: James's journal is a supposedly manly, strictly 'Quidditch only' book. Rae will definitely read something that deviates from Quidditch but I'm afraid you're going to have to wait a little while longer for James to admit to anything that personal. I'm so happy you like it. Ponies for reviewing!

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Review #12, by Cheesesticksbbq Good girls, Evil plans

22nd July 2014:
Love this chapter. It's my favourite one so far.
The part about yoga was pure genius.
I especially enjoyed the Rae/James fluff. They're so adorable.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! It's very gratifying to hear that you enjoyed the chapter!

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Review #13, by diamondmoon Orientation for beginners

21st June 2014:
I love love love this! I'm seriously hooked on this story. The plot is great and original and it isn't just about the romance.

This story reminds me a little bit of Clash, which is BIG compliment since Clash is my all time favorite story on here. I think it's mostly the writing style that makes me think of it.

Also, I can see that you're making the James/Rae romance very gradual. Keep doing that! It's always more fun to build up the tension until the very last second and adding as many cute moments as possible(even though it's painful for the reader and you just want to jump inside the story slap the two together and scream "MAKE OUT!"). Because if they get together in the beginning of the story then it's kind of just like What now? Because you can't do as much with them in the story when they're together.

Anywho... I LOVE every single chapter so far and I'm sure I'll love the next!

-Emily c:

Author's Response: Hi Emily,
Thank you so much! I adore shenanigan's writing style, so, that was an ABSOLUTELY delightful compliment that made my already inflated head grow a little bigger.
I'm trying as hard as I can to make the romance gradual and keep the plot line intact as well but as you so eloquently put it, I find it a bit hard sometimes not to just stuff them in a broom closet together. (Often the result of what happens when my plot bunnies run wild)
All the same, thank you again for the lovely review. I'm really excited that you like the story so far!

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Review #14, by Bellatrix lestrange Orientation for beginners

18th June 2014:
I really like it! Update. Update. Update.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Updates hopefully will happen sometime soon so just keep checking!

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Review #15, by TheHARRYPOTTERenthusiast Orientation for beginners

25th May 2014:
It's good. I kind of really like it.
I'm kind of unsure about Fred right now. And I'd love it if you elaborated a tad more on the feud between Dom and James but apart from that, I honestly felt it was very well written and gripping.

Would love to read some more...

Author's Response: I'm glad you kind of like it. Fred will clear out a bit more in the next couple of chapters and yes, I will definitely take your suggestion and elaborate more on the Dom-James feud.
Thank you for the lovely review!

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Review #16, by Cowgirlyeehaw Rules of the game

25th May 2014:

Here is your requested review. I LOVE IT. NO really, its pretty awesomely written and the characters are so relatable.

You might have made it a bit longer but I see a very long chapter 3 so all's good.

Can't wait to see where this ends!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. It makes me smile in questionable ways when people say such sweet things.

I will definitely try make the coming chapters a bit longer.

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Review #17, by Bunniesandhypocrites The Annual Quidditch Chorus

25th May 2014:
You're a very good writer. The plot of the story is still mildly unclear to me but that only makes me want to read more. I really liked reading it. Its exciting.

Chapter images, though?

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you like it so far. I shall try to get chapter images but no guarantees. Although I will post face claims at the end of Chapter 4 so you can check that out.

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Review #18, by Themadhatter Orientation for beginners

24th May 2014:
I love this story like so much. I can't wait to see where its headed. Rae is so cute. I wish I could create OC's like you because every one of your characters is just so well planned out and unique.
Dom's like the crazy, loony one. Rae is the sensible, shy, thoughtful one and Drew is by far my favorite of the trio. She is so cool and spunky. I think someone mentioned that already but still.
I'm already shipping James and Rae so hard it physically pains me...
I didn't notice any grammatical errors or typos so great job! (even if there were errors, I couldn't care less. The plot is just brill.)
Loved all of your chapters, amazing writer.

Update as fast as possible.

Author's Response: Oh my. That was very nice of you to say. As you can imagine, I am terribly flattered and my head has grown just a tad bigger. It makes me really happy that you love the story and the characters. I'm sure you're a wonderful writer yourself.
On that note, updates are coming up as fast as possible, so just stick around for the ride!

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Review #19, by Lunalovegoodlover Orientation for beginners

22nd May 2014:
Okay, here's your review...I love it. It's snarky, fun, well written and overall extremely entertaining to read.

I like how you're trying to make the procedure of Rae falling for James kind of subtle, I guess?

Like the part where she saias James has a nice laugh! So that's great. I really enjoy reading scenes where Drew features because I think she's spunky.

I'm not so sure right now about Fred. He seems a bit too obsessed with Drew at this point.

Another thing I thought I'd mention, i would personally like it if you could get chapter images. I'd kill to see a faceclaim for Drew and Dom.
My fav line in this chapter was, 'Chef Harry likes to call this, charred olives on a toothpick.'

Brilliant writing. I'd like to read some more so updates would be welcome!

Author's Response: I'm happy that you like the story so far. It puts a rather goofy smile on my face when people say such flattering things.
You're right about how I'm trying to keep the falling process very subtle. At least I'm trying...It's oh so hard not to just push them into a broom closet together.
I promise that by the end of this story, you will have fallen in love with least more than you are now.
I will try to get chapter images but if you would like faceclaims, I can list them out in the author's note, next chapter. Updates will happen as soon as possible.

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Review #20, by JenIwishendedwithlopez Orientation for beginners

22nd May 2014:
I love, love, LOVE Drew. 'I'd rather stick pins in my eyes', that had me laughing for a good couple of minutes. I liked James too and Rae and Dom and oh forget it, I just love everybody.

adorable story...keep those chapters coming along fast, eh?


Author's Response: I'm really glad you like Drew. She's very pleased and says that it kind of hard not to.
All the others say, 'Thank you for the lovely review, Jen.' And I shall try to update as fast as humanly possible.

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Review #21, by masterhasgivendobbyasock Rules of the game

17th May 2014:
Are your thestrals hungry? Starve your thestrals. Deprive them of flesh.
^ ^ that there was my fav part. I also liked
Don't hate me cuz you ain't me yeah

Author's Response: Er, thanks again, I guess!:D

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Review #22, by masterhasgivendobbyasock Rules of the game

17th May 2014:
Are your thestrals hungry? Starve your thestrals. Deprive them of flesh.
^ ^ that there was my fav part. I also liked
Don't hate me cuz you ain't me yeah

Author's Response: Thank you so much for coming back to this fic, reading it and reviewing. I know you prefer not to write entire essays, but these work just as fine for me!

So, you said it, PONIES!

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Review #23, by Kaceylovesharrypotter Rules of the game

17th May 2014:
Absolutely love this fic. Brilliant writing. I love how Dom goes loony after Rae and Drew tell her about the league and don't even get me started on James. Can I just say, yum! The part where Dom gets mad at the two of them for coming late...adorable!

keep writing more chapters cuz I'd lo-ove to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks. Reading reviews makes me happier than you can imagine! I'm glad you like it so far! Updates are going down as fast as possible, so stick around for the ride.

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Review #24, by Autumnlovingcolors The Annual Quidditch Chorus

6th May 2014:
Wow. I really love the way you write. I think it's cool that all the humor in this chapter is not pronounced and tardy, which in my opinion actually makes it stand out more. I especially love the bit where Dom tells Rae that her face is irrational. I also really like James generally because well, he's James. Also your chapter's plot like was really good, with the reverse psychology and everything. I think you should write more because I definitely want to read more.
One thing that I found that could be improvised is telling the readers a bit more about Rae, her personality and looks, but you might be doing that in the following chapters so no worries there.
P.S: My favorite line was, 'I can't believe you named the the thestrals, Flora and Ruby.'
Keep writing!

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for that very flattering review. You're right, I know that the details on appearances and personality still haven't become very clear. Hopefully that will get sorted out in the following chapters. I'm working on it!

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Review #25, by thedragonslayer The Annual Quidditch Chorus

30th April 2014:
I really like your way of writing. The part about James's ego was kind of funny. I also found Dominique, Drew and Rae's 'banter' very fun to read and I can't wait to see how this goes.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. It makes me really happy to know that you like my writing.
P.S: I found the banter and the ego thing very fun to write although I really like James and don't, in actuality think he's very egotistical.

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