Reading Reviews for Trailing shoelaces
  
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by VV diseases, Wagers and trailing shoelaces

12th December 2013:
waiting 4 what james will come up with !!!

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Review #2, by STG Sagmag Detention, doorknobs and trailing shoelaces

13th October 2013:
I'll update when you update. I mean it, Vibha.

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Review #3, by Guesswho22 Detention, doorknobs and trailing shoelaces

11th September 2013:
It's not bad :D Why is Dom in ravenclaw?O_o

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Review #4, by lovestings Clumsiness, Awkwardness and allergies

1st September 2013:
Hello, darling! I read all these amazing stories and I always seem to forget to review so I thought I would pay a newbie a visit. I was attracted to your story almost immediately because your bio was adorable. Shoe laces, clumsiness, James S. Potter - The whole thing drew me in. Of course, I can't help but let you know that there are some mistakes here and there with your writing but everyone is human so no worries there. I was a bit confused on the whole running into James situation and the allergic part, as well. I can obviously see your humor part of the story and It made me smile but perhaps you should spend some more time adding some explanation? Just a suggestion, of course! I'm off to read the next chapter!
xx

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Review #5, by goldenginny Detention, doorknobs and trailing shoelaces

1st September 2013:
This looks like its gonna be a great story! :D but I would like for james to be a bit cockier, just a suggestion :) xo

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Review #6, by gracelyn Clumsiness, Awkwardness and allergies

11th July 2013:
I like it! But is her name Rae or Lynn? Maybe I'm just an idiot. you should write more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it ..:)
Her first name is Rae.. Last name, Lynn. Easy to get it muddled..it's not just you :D


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