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Review #1, by StellaRose Chapter 1

22nd August 2013:
What a great first chapter! If you had asked me to review this for you I probably would have sat and stared at the review box for a few minutes trying to figure out some sort of cc for you. I can't.

Your characterization is very good-I feel like I understand the OC completely and empathize with her. So many stories are fluff but don't deal with the fact that not everyone has a great school experience.

I love that you give the title of the story at the very end. 'Dear Annabelle.' Very cute and again, it works with the story very well.

I was not bored at all while reading this nor did I have any questions about where the story was going. Amazing job and I can't wait to read more :)

--Emmy

Author's Response: Wow, thankyou so much! I was worried about the chapter but you have made me feel so much better about it :)
xx


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Review #2, by Serendipity1234 Chapter 1

24th July 2013:
It seems cute so far! Charlotte seems sweet and I like her. I like how she calls her diary Annabelle, too. I've never thought of anyone naming a diary before, though that does make sense. The only thing I would suggest is to either give Charlotte a stronger reason to dislike Louis (maybe elaborate on what you already mentioned here) or to not have Charlotte dislike Louis too much. Just because right now, from the little information we have, I don't really think I understand why she dislikes him. It makes sense that she would hold a grudge against him for laughing at her, but she says he's stuck up and arrogant and all these things and I don't see why yet. You probably have some examples lined up but I thought I'd mention it just because I found it odd that he's one of her main...er, enemies? Not sure what to call them..but yeah.
Update soon :)
AND WHEN LIFE TAKES OVER. BECAUSE I LOVE THAT ONE.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
I do plan on getting around to editing the first chapter of this story, I just haven't had the time yet. So thankyou for your suggestions!
Haha I will try and update soon, I just haven't seemed to have the time as of late :/


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Review #3, by Serendipity1234 Chapter 1

24th July 2013:
It seems cute so far! Charlotte seems sweet and I like her. I like how she calls her diary Annabelle, too. I've never thought of anyone naming a diary before, though that does make sense. The only thing I would suggest is to either give Charlotte a stronger reason to dislike Louis (maybe elaborate on what you already mentioned here) or to not have Charlotte dislike Louis too much. Just because right now, from the little information we have, I don't really think I understand why she dislikes him. It makes sense that she would hold a grudge against him for laughing at her, but she says he's stuck up and arrogant and all these things and I don't see why yet. You probably have some examples lined up but I thought I'd mention it just because I found it odd that he's one of her main...er, enemies? Not sure what to call them..but yeah.
Update soon :)
AND WHEN LIFE TAKES OVER. BECAUSE I LOVE THAT ONE.

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Review #4, by blackzero Chapter 1

22nd May 2013:
refreshing plot. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thankyou !

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Review #5, by Lovineht Chapter 1

28th April 2013:
Holy crap, I love this already! Can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response: Thankyou so much!! :)

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Review #6, by rupertlover Chapter 1

27th April 2013:
Omg yay! New story!! I'm officially excited! This chapter was awesome and so well written! I so can't wait for the next one, so you have to update really soon! Okay? Awesome.
:)

Author's Response: Yay, me too!! Thankyou so much!!
Haha, ok, I'll try :P


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Review #7, by potterfan Chapter 1

26th April 2013:
This is a good first chapter!! This story is quite interesting! I can't wait to see where this goes!
Update soon!

Author's Response: Thankyou so much!! :D

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