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Review #1, by missclaire17 Yours

18th July 2013:
Hello! I'm here reviewing my OTP!

I have never thought of what it would be like for James and Lily to live without one another because they never had to do so. Reading your one-shot just really made me realize how hard that would have been, to go on in life knowing that your other half won't ever be here with you.

Something that I love that you did in here is that you wrote about Lily doing the things that they used to do together, and that hit me really hard. I can imagine how James and Lily were, so full of life and expectations and hopes and dreams for what they would do after the war and everything, but then it all ended when Lily discovered that James was gone.

I think you did a wonderful job portraying something that I can't even begin to fathom, James and Lily living without one another. Awesome job writing this! (:

Author's Response: Hello!

I think the idea of James and Lily being without each other is too painful to register, but I wanted to explore the idea and see what would happen.

I always imagine their relationship to be one of those really cute ones where they did little things that created memories, but unfortunately they didn't get to do much :(

Thank you for such a lovely review! x


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Review #2, by RosieWeasly11 Yours

3rd May 2013:
aw this is so sweet and sad! BTW my braces ache more than lily's heart!! lolz xx

Author's Response: Haha, I bet they do :P
"YOUR MOUTH IS LIKE AN OCEAN!"
(I bet everyone else will think we're crazy now.)


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