Reading Reviews for Annalisa Zabini
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Review #1, by Guest First Day back

8th May 2013:
I think you would seriously benefit from having a beta to read through your story before you post it, there are lots of mistakes in spelling and grammar.

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Review #2, by Mariah Webb (mionestwin32) The week before Hogwarts

5th May 2013:
Can't wait to see what his answer will be. I hope its yes but either way will be interesting to see. Hope you put a new one up very soon.

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Review #3, by Pinkpal1992 The week before Hogwarts

5th May 2013:
Yes they should date, make pansy uber jelouse

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Review #4, by Yayy im a Hufflepuff The week before Hogwarts

4th May 2013:
Ooooh so good. next to dramione romance my next favourite thing has to be Hermione being a zabini twin. Can't wait till your next chapter, well done :D

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Review #5, by AL The Birthday Party

1st May 2013:
Cool. :)
Basically we'll have to exchange emails privately. Google docs would be ideal! :)


Author's Response: hey AL send me your email address so i can use u as a beta.. looks like i am going to need one after all lol.

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Review #6, by AL The Birthday Party

29th April 2013:
Good chapter! Keep up the good work- just, you spell Blaise as BLAISE. Not Blasie. And even if it is a term of endearment from Annalisa and their mother. Draco wouldn't call him that. Apart from that, it's a really compelling read! :) If you ever want a Beta to help I'd love to!

Author's Response: that would be awesome, ty

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Review #7, by J.K Rowling's Apprentice The Return of Annalisa

24th April 2013:
More! I want More!
( Though I wish you didn't have to kill Hermione )

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Review #8, by kayla The Return of Annalisa

19th April 2013:
i love it ! please continue this is a really good start! :)

Author's Response: Just finished chapter two, hope u like it. currently working on chapter three hope to have it done by Wednesday and up by Friday...

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