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Review #1, by alexaemd123 No

24th May 2015:
Ah! I love this story!!! I love the drama and I really love Claire and James! :)) I love how this ended and I need you to PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!! Like as soon as possible! I don't want to wait like last chapter!! I feel soo bad for scorp and rose and Emily and Fred! I really feel bad for James and Claire! I couldn't stop reading this chapter! I've been on the computer for God knows how long waiting for an update and my life is made! Thank you for writing and I can't believe Claire's parents are getting divorced!! What?! But any who... please update soon!! Love this story so freaking much! :))

Author's Response: Hello!! I'm so so so so so so sorry I made you wait for so long! But I'm glad you really like my story and this chapter :) I've been working on the next chapter all morning so hopefully it will be finished and up soon! Your comment made me smile. Thank you for reviewing!!

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Review #2, by Dragonflies Mystery

1st April 2015:
Hey its been such a long time. Please don't tell me that you have abandoned the story! Please update it. The suspense is too much to bare. I cant't wait for the next update.Please do put up the next chapter

Author's Response: I promise I haven't given up on the story! Trust me, there's too much that needs to happen before this story ends. I will hopefully have the next chapter up soon! Thanks for sticking with me :)

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Review #3, by alexaemd123 Mystery

7th January 2015:
Yay!!! Things are getting juicy!! I feel doo bad for James right now..and obviously I'm sick of Claire not knowing the truth!! Ughh! I need her to know the truth already!! It's killing me!!! Anyways, I love this story too much! PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE soon!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :) Things will get better soon...hopefully! Thank you so much! I'm sorry I haven't updated in over 3 months but I'm working on it! I should potentially have something up in the next few days.

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Review #4, by Chloe Mystery

6th January 2015:
Omg this story makes me so irrationally angry it's I need to calm myself down so i can go to bed.seriously though for my sanity which I'm not sure I have any More of, things need to be sorted out and the b*tch ms terrible needs to get down off of her bloody high horse before I die of anger.Good story though! 😠

Author's Response: I'm sorry you are frustrated with all the misunderstandings and how messed up things are. Everything will be sorted out soon...hopefully.

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Review #5, by Hedwig33 Summer Flings

26th October 2014:
Ooooh I really like Dom's character and James sounds hot. ;) Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Review #6, by potterfan310 Apologies

4th September 2014:

Poor Claire, I feel like since her parents are muggles, though correct me if I'm wrong, that they don't care too much about her per say as they are busy with work and such. I feel like her mum isn't going to take the pregnancy news so well, when Claire tells them.

HA! I love Rumor number two. If only James was. *sigh*

URGH, ANGELINE LIKE WHY! How does she pop up everything when secrets are getting told!?!?

Ahh it may be cliche but I do love a good old broom cupboard romance! Plus I LOVE Lily even more for doing it! ♥

Bless Claire but James, I don't know whether to love him or hate him right now.

Can't wait for the next one!

Sophie ♥

Author's Response: Hello, hello! I am so sorry I haven't responded until now. I'm glad you are liking it! And yes, Claire's parents are muggles. Her dad is fascinated with magic while her mother dislikes a lot. The next chapter should be up soon. I'm finishing it up hopefully tonight. I'm so so so so sorry for the long update wait.



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Review #7, by alexaemd123 Apologies

3rd September 2014:
Oh my God! This chapter was so good! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE soon! I love the whole misunderstanding with James and Claire! Ooh! I love it! :)

Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you liked it! You are just the sweetest :) I am currently working on the next chapter so hopefully it isn't a terribly long wait.

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Review #8, by court Apologies

2nd September 2014:
I am sorry but I hope you're not meaning for us to sympathize with Emily. there is no excuse for cheating, especially among friends, and I have no respect for her or scorpius at this point. I really hope that rose and fred find out and dump them both and that emily and scorpius are miserable while rose and fred move on and are happy with better people. I am sorry if that seems harsh, but there is no excuse for their current selfishness.

Author's Response: I am truly sorry that you feel this way about Emily and Scorpius. Cheating is wrong, yes, but this is Claire's perspective on the matter and she cares deeply for the two of them. I do hope you continue reading even though you don't like Emily and Scorpius. Thanks for the review :)

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Review #9, by EeshaPotter Regrets

24th August 2014:
When will you update ?

Author's Response: I just posted the newest chapter right now :)

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Review #10, by potterfan310 Regrets

10th August 2014:

Urgh, Angeline needs to GO! She is so horrible, just urgh, get rid of her. James needs to tell her where to go, for sure. She is evil through and through.

I am almost sure, Angeline did something to Claire. She did it for sure and James better break up with her now.

Poor Claire, she needs all the hugs once again. At least Dom is in the loop now and Lily. Lily is honestly my favourite character, I have a good feeling her and Claire are going to become good friends over the course of her pregnancy!

Anegline gave Claire the potion, somehow! I am sure of it.

Ahhh I can't wait for the next one! Hope Angeline gets the punishment she deserves!


Author's Response: I feel bad that Angeline is tormenting Claire so much. I agree with you, Angeline needs to go. Soon!

I'm glad you love Lily! Lily is such a fun character to write.

The next chapter is in and will be up soon! I'm really sorry for the long wait but hopefully it will be worth it! It is a bit longer than my other chapters so that's a plus :)

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Review #11, by potterfan310 Caught

10th August 2014:

I thought I had read this but then I realised I missed another two updates, argh. Here now though :D

HA! I love Emily, even if she is getting it on with Scorp. She is so spot on with James and Claire (who need to get together *hint hint*)

Winky!! I LOVE that you've got Winky in it. I was so upset they missed her out of the films, so its nice to see her again.

Oh Scorpius *sigh*

I am actually so happy, Claire has quit Quidditch. I know how much it means to her but its the right thing. As for James, he needs to sort things out and get rid of Miss Terrible once and for all.

Lily is one of my all time favourite Next-Gen kids and I LOVE IT when she's protective over her brothers, just like they are to her. LILY IS ME RIGHT NOW, I SWEAR! Her rant to Claire about them being perfect is so true!

Off to the next one :D


Author's Response: Sorry I haven't responded to your reviews until now!

I'm glad you like Emily! And I LOOOVEEE WINKY! I can't believe she wasn't in the movies...but neither was Peeves so..yeah :(

Yay for Lily! She is always fantastic in every fanfic. There will be much more of her in the story too!

Thanks for reviewing :)

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Review #12, by alexaemd123 Regrets

4th August 2014:
Nice! This chapter was a little bit of a filler but I liked it! I want miss terrible to just die... haha. She needs to go. I bet it was her that put the potion in Claire's cup. I know it. I need more James and Claire love though! Lol. I love this story! Please continue soon!!!

Author's Response: Eeep thanks :) I'm sorry for the filler but it is essential for the chapters to come. I'm glad you liked it though! As for your great prediction, you'll see who it was soon enough! I'm really happy that you love my story. I'm almost done with Chapter 14 so I'll post it soon.

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Review #13, by LaughLikeAnAwesomePerson Regrets

3rd August 2014:
This is a really good chapter but I hate Angelina. When will you update next?

Author's Response: Thanks :) I am almost done with Chapter 14 so hopefully really soon!

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Review #14, by alexaemd123 Caught

31st July 2014:
Omg! Please please continue fast! I love this story!!! I started reading it yesterday and just finished this chapter! I love it! I cant wait to read what will happen next!

Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you like it :) the next chapter is currently being validated so you shouldn't have to wait long! Your review totally made my day! Thank you so much :D

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Review #15, by potterfan310 Twisted

28th July 2014:

Me again. NOOO the chapter title gives me a bad feeling already!

James' POV oooh I like, a lot :)

I am super happy, James knows now and that he is sticking around. Not too mention he wants Claire not Miss Terrible, now he just has to get rid of her. Urgh she is such a pain, SHE. HAS. TO. GO!

" Note to self: flex any time Claire is around." - OH YES! James is perfect I swear, not to mention he is so smitten with Claire!

I'm surprised Claire wore a cropped top, since she would kind of be showing by now considering she's nearly twelve weeks. HA! I love that Claire says the Potter boys have ruined her life, slightly true though. I'm excited for Lily to find out about her pregnancy for some reason.

Drunk Scorpius is too funny, but he needs to stay with Rosie. ScoRose are my babies.

JAMES AND CLAIRE, JUST YES, ONE HUNDRED TIMES YES! They are perfect for one another, I swear. Especially when he goes to talk to her, I need more of that in my life. Emily is definitely channelling my inner Claire/James shipper by making them kiss.


NO, NO, NO. I want Emily/Scorpius to be happy but my heart is screaming SCOROSE!

With this and the last chappie, there were a few lines which should have been on a separate line, if that makes sense? E.G Yours -
"Earth to James." I groaned. I really didn't want to be anywhere near her.
"What?Ē I snapped.

When it should be -
"Earth to James."
I groaned. I really didn't want to be anywhere near her.
"What?" I snapped.
Because James is the one groaning not Angeline.

Just an idea but maybe use bold to highlight James/Claire's POV and your Author Notes, so they stand out from the actual story.

Can't wait for the next one!!


Author's Response: Hello, hello!

I am glad you liked James' POV :)

Ms. Terrible is...yeah. Gotta love her, right?

Claire is only about eight weeks pregnant at this point since it is October so she isn't showing yet. It feels like it has been longer, doesn't it? I'm excited for the world to meet Lily! She's in the next chapter too!

We all need a friend like Scorp! He's too great to handle. Except for the whole kissing Emily thing. *Cough* awkward *cough* That was probably bad. His entire love life will be interesting and fantastic all at the same time. It'll be great, I pinky promise.

But seriously, how totally awesome is Emily!? She makes life awkward for Claire by hard core pushing James and her together! Incredible friend right there because James and Claire (Claimes? Jaire? I don't know what their mashup is yet :O) are just the best!

I get what you are saying, I'll definitely do that. And the bolding for sure!

Thanks for the amazing review!! You are always great!

P.S. The next chapter is being validated currently and chapter 13 is done! So yay for quick updates!

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Review #16, by potterfan310 Promises

28th July 2014:

I am so bad lately at R+R'ing, so bad that I've missed two updates!

Bless Claire, is it any wonder she's nervous though! Somehow I really don't think James is going to take it well.

Emily is crazy! But I am SO glad she called James over, in a way forcing Claire to tell him. Oh my god! SHE'S GOING TO TELL HIM ISN'T SHE? AH! I AM NOT PREPARED!

Yay! I love getting the background on OC's I don't know why but it makes me love them more because you can see their motives and who they are as a person with their family. Bless Claire *hugs* losing someone is not an easy thing.

I am even more curious about her family now, is Claire muggleborn? maybe I don't know why but I'm getting that vibe. But then again maybe she's a half-blood. Hmm? On top of that I'm curious as to how they are going to react when Claire tells them.

I LOVE the fact you put the pinky swear in because it shows they aren't so different as to they were in the summer. It's cute because it brings them together. Aww Dom is so clueless, thinking Claire wants Al. More like his brother. Urgh, Miss Terrible needs to be put in her place and fast!

Oh yes James totally has the hots for Claire, he wants to be more than friends, I am certain of it!

My only thing is that your slipped up and wrote 'mom' rather than mum at the stat of the flashback when Claire is on about her grandfather. And where you added the ~*~ before the flashback maybe add it at the end before the word present.

Off to the next one :D


Author's Response: Hello!

For her family situation, pieces will be put into the story slowly at a time. There will be a lot, of course, at Christmas. And Claire is muggleborn. James mentioned it in an earlier chapter (very briefly). There will be more on her parents and how they feel about magic to come. There is actually talk about it in chapter 13 (which is done!!!)

I love the pinky swear too! It is their reassurance for one another which is adorable.

I can't say too much about Ms. Terrible because I don't want to give any spoilers. But we won't be done with her for a while. Dun dun dun!

Dang! I'll have to go back and edit. I've been trying so hard with the "mums." Thank you so much!!

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Review #17, by SyPancake Twisted

28th July 2014:
This is one of the awesomest fanfics I've ever read!! I really want to see what happens with all the couples and Claire and James. Hope to see the next chapter soon :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, you're so sweet! The next chapter is waiting to be validated and I am finishing chapter 13 right now so you shouldn't have to wait too long for an update :)

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Review #18, by Neha Twisted

26th July 2014:
Oh My Gosh! This was such a good chapter and the James and Claire bit was such good drama. I love Drama!!!

Author's Response: Thank you :) Glad you enjoyed it!

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Review #19, by potterfan310 Truth

6th July 2014:

Uh-oh, I get that Claire is so worried but resigning on the day of the match, man that is not good news.

HA! Oh Albus, you idiot. Of course Claire does not want to snog you senseless :p

There are a few bits where certain things should be on a new line, such as where Claire says something but then you having Albus smiling at the end.

I feel for Dom, since she isn't currently in the loop about you know what. I love the names for the Quidditch moves, very creative and original! Especially the Gryffindor Weave :D

Try and keep consistency with the numbers as you've switch from writing ten minutes to 10 points and little things like that.

Bless Claire for struggling on with a broken leg, man can that girl even feel pain? Such a trooper. Not gonna lie my heart was racing through the whole chapter, mainly due to the title. Aww James, the idiot snogging miss terrible in public, urgh.

Not to mention go Claire for getting getting spotted for the professional teams!!

Kind of surprised Madame Pomfrey didn't lecture Claire about playing whilst pregnant but hey ho, she did give her that potion after all.


I feel for James the way he got all worked up and not understanding, but damn SHUT UP AND LISTEN FOR ONCE JAMES!



Dying for the next chapter now, oh my god *heavy breathing*

Soph x

Author's Response: Hi! Sorry it took so long for me to reply! Busy busy :O

I'm sorry for being so evil this chapter! There is a perfectly good reason for dragging it out like this, I promise. She will tell soon, so don't worry ;) it'll be great!

The next chapter will come sometime this week!

Thanks for the great review :)

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Review #20, by Sabrina Realizations

2nd July 2014:
This chapter was really good!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

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Review #21, by potterfan310 Realizations

1st July 2014:

The start, oh my!! :D I got so excited then but of course Claire was dreaming. Hmm.. (maybe put it in italics so it stands out more, just a suggestion)

I just want to hug Claire so much!! Man I have all the feels. Her hormones are definitely all over the place, bless her. First the dream, then snapping at Dom and James.

I am super glad she's keeping the baby. I think because of the stupid situation is why she was choosing to go through with it. But deep down she can do this!! It's either a mini her or a mini James :D At least she made the decision herself too, which makes me glad.

I normally hate the fact in teen pregnancy stories that the mother keeps playing Quidditch, because it's just not possible. But I do kind of like your take on it. Maybe I'm warming to the matter...

I kind of want to know more about Claire's life and her parents, whether she has any siblings or not?

Give the girl a medal, Rose is our very own Sherlock! HA! I love Rose so much, I'm glad you put her in here!! Oh and is Claire a 7th year like James or 6th year like Al?

Claire do as Rose says!! Listen for once!

Looking forward to the next one :)


Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this chapter! For some reason I am not the biggest fan of it so I made the next chapter extra dramatic and exciting :)

I agree with you on the moms continuing to play Quidditch. I feel it is highly irresponsible. However, I have a reason for her continuing to play so I made it safe :)

It's funny you bring up her parents and siblings because there is a little explanation in the next chapter.

Rose is amazing!! More of her to come too :) And Claire is in her 7th year. Her birthday is in the summer.

I put the next chapter in last night so hopefully it is validated soon!

You are seriously amazing for always reviewing :)

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Review #22, by potterfan310 Help

29th June 2014:
Me again.

Well hell, Claire's going to do it, isn't she. I feel so bad for her and she needs all the hugs *hugs for Claire* She's so confused and I mean, is it any wonder? She's got Miss not so angelic on her back, James hates her and thinks she's with Al and well Al is partly to blame for things.

At least James is trying to talk to Claire. She has to tell him she's never dated Al for real, that it was all a hoax. I think if James knew that at least he might feel better and even more sorry about acting the way he did with not only Claire, but his brother.

Moaning Myrtle, ha! Oh the drama, she's a bit of a gossip isn't she? :p

Nooo, Claire had the perfect moment to tell him the truth both about her and Al fake dating and the baby. Is she okay though, considering he knocked her to the floor? "I know that if it was us, thatís what I would do." - THIS!!! CLAIRE TELL HIM FOR GODS SAKE! The perfect opportunity and Claire blew it.

Is Scorpius jealous of Emily and Fred? What he likes Emily!?! Nooo ScoRose must forever happen.

It isn't a major thing thing, but personally I think that writing out numbers makes things flow better than actually putting the number. Eg - It was 8:05 to It was five past eight..

I'm thinking that Claire doesn't go through with the abortion, plus even if she did I wouldn't think she would be a good state to play Quidditch three days afterwards. So I'm thinking she doesn't go through with it and then something happens during the match and she gets hurt. It comes out she's pregnant and everyone instantly thinks Al. Claire's in the hospital wing and James comes to see her so she blurts out that it's his.?

Anywho, can't wait for the next chapter. I'm really excited now! :D


Author's Response: Claire is conflicted with the whole situation. She doesn't know that James still has feelings for her and she doesn't know her own true feelings even though we all do. She thinks the abortion is her only way to solve the problem. But with James saying "us" it kind of opens her eyes (which will play into the next chapter and impact her decision).

Isn't Myrtle wonderful?

Your reaction made me laugh out loud. She really did blow it! But she was a bit overwhelmed with her feelings and what to do, she couldn't say it. Plus I have planned the perfect time for her to actually tell him. Just wait ;)

I'm twisting things up for Scorpius. He is about to go for an interesting ride.

I will keep that in mind when I write times again. Thanks!

The abortion and Quidditch match are the next two chapters so you shall see soon. Chapter 8 is waiting to be validated and I'm nearly finished with Chapter 9.

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

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Review #23, by potterfan310 Deal

29th June 2014:
How did I miss two updates, man I've been so busy but I'm finally here!

Poor Claire and her morning sickness, I don't think she'll be sticking with Quidditch much longer now either.

Angeline is definitely dragging things out me thinks, she's probably waiting until Claire lets her guard down to tell James and then all hell will be let loose.

Urgh, James I dislike you right now. Stop being so full of yourself and hating on Claire. But good for her in telling him she had something important to say. I honestly don't think Claire will go through with the abortion, even if she thinks it will stop Angeline from telling James.

James POV, how interesting. I'm glad he feels bad, so he bloody well should. I feel weirdly bad for James now, I mean I think he likes Claire a lot but now the both of them have messed it all up.

So it's official, I hate Angeline with a passion, the back stabbing horrible witch. Thank god James saw sense, well kind of and dumped her sorry arse. He loves Claire, I'm sure of it now. He can't stand the thought of Angeline's comments or that Claire has supposedly been with Albus. He loves her, I swear.

Angeline needs a good old slap, preferably hard. She's clearly the one who wants him for his last name and of course the fame.

Off to read the next one.


Author's Response: I was wondering where you were! Thanks for continuing to read and review!

Don't hate too much on James. He is a tad heartbroken at the moment. He really shouldn't have said what he did, but he will redeem himself somehow.

Angeline is a terrible person. You're right, she does need a slap in the face. I'm excited for you to see how Angeline's role will play out in this story. It will only get more dramatic and intense from here ;)

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Review #24, by Eena Help

28th June 2014:
This is really good but can u update plz?

Author's Response: Thank you :) The next chapter is currently waiting to be validated so it should be up in no time! Plus chapter 9 is almost finished :)

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Review #25, by HermionesSecretClone Help

18th June 2014:
Hi! Great chapter,really great,unTIL SHE DIDN'T TELL JAMES WHEN SHE HAD THE PERFECT OPPORTUNITY!!!Please,don't make her have an abortion. The baby will be adorable!! Plus,James will be a great father. Please? -HSC 10/10

Author's Response: I am glad you liked it! You will see what happens with the abortion next chapter ;) but ps! I think you'll be really happy!

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