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Review #1, by PolyJuice_ Once Upon A Time

14th April 2013:
Overload of feels! Whoa!

The details in this story were wonderful. I could sympathize with him, big time. The lyrics you chose fit the story so well, not just in the story line of it, but the feeling in it. (Wow, that made no sense, lol).

I didn't see very many errors, and if there were any they were just minor issues - nada big.

The description in this story was simply brilliant. It wasn't enough to overpower me or leave me wanting, it was the right mix. I could just see him leaving, and feeling the odd combination of uncaring, wishing it could have been different and a bit of relief.

The bit about Reg? Wow. It just broke me, seeing that last little bit of family go down the drain.

It was a great job - especially fantastic for your first songfic (right?).

I loved it,
Liz

Author's Response: Hey!

Thanks for the review! I will go look at those minor details ahah.

I hav never actually written a song fic so Im glad that you didn't think I messed up haha.

Thanks Liz!

Mya


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Review #2, by AlexFan Once Upon A Time

13th April 2013:
You had a couple of grammatical errors but nothing big. Also, I've gotten really used to your style of writing now. It's not a bad thing it's just that whenever I come to read a story of yours I know that I'm looking for something that's serious and full of drama.

Anyway, for some reason I thought this was talking about Andromeda but then it mentioned the Potter Mansion and I was like never mind.

Anyway, I've never read a one-shot that was about Sirius leaving his family and this was actually really interesting. Great job on it!

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