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Review #1, by -BookDinosaur- Pretty Girl, Handsome Boy

8th April 2013:
That was really sweet. Corny, a bit, but undeniably sweet.

The song you chose complemented the story nicely, and your characters were engaging, but (yep, sorry, there is a 'but') they seem a bit flat-they have no faults or insecurities apart from at the beginning where they are too scared to ask each other out. However, I will admit that it is hard to build character with such few chapters, and as such, you did a really good job of it.

I really enjoyed that-keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate the criticism and your thoughts, I will remember this for my next story. I know that it's corny, I am such a sucker for a corny romance ha! Thank you again! :)

Zoe


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