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Reading Reviews for The One that got Away
  
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by rebakahgranger The One that got Away

30th June 2013:
Well, Hannah, you won't READ inapropriate stories, but you'll WRITE them? Interesting. Anyway, you did tell me this one during school, so I shouldn't be surprised. I'm back from the UK now, and you NEVER RESPONDED TO MY OTHER REVIEW!!!

~Rebecca

P.S. James's eyes are hazel, not brown. *cowers because I know you hate it when I correct you*

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Review #2, by AHeat The One that got Away

17th April 2013:
But... she broke it off with him, how is he the one that got away? Wouldn't she be the one that got away from him?
Good story, cool concept, well written. Keep up the good work!

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Review #3, by iatevoldysnose The One that got Away

7th April 2013:
I really like this story! I can imagine this
happening:) Good work! Although I do
feel sorry for James at the start I think
she was better with Sirius (in this story)
Good work!

-iatevoldysnose

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Review #4, by iatevoldysnose The One that got Away

7th April 2013:
I really like this story! I can imagine this
happening:) Good work! Although I do
feel sorry for James at the start I think
she was better with Sirius (in this story)
Good work!

-iatevoldysnose

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