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23 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Arz Mild Insomnia

15th January 2017:
I hope you update your story..

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Review #2, by pink bunny Mild Insomnia

4th August 2016:
I like this alot keep it coming. looking forward to seeing more

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Review #3, by valdezlover101 Mild Insomnia

2nd March 2016:

This is a really good story. It would be better if you put a bit of Luna's POV though. Maybe you can try showing her as a little bit of a sane person who does not think she harbours any feelings for Draco but is just trying to help him.

Or, you can show her as someone who is not sure of what she feels for him, but I don't want her to look lovesick and weak. She shouldn't get hurt by Draco's behaviour.

Please read my review! And please update so soon your writing is REALLY VERY good!


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Review #4, by Sarah :-) Mild Insomnia

15th January 2016:
Awesome!!! I can't wait for you to post more! You're a fabulous writer. :


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Review #5, by liriousfeend Mild Insomnia

29th December 2015:
I think this story is so sweet! Please keep writing, I'm anxious to read the next chapter. (:

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Review #6, by RaphaDruid  Draco's Ghosts

11th December 2015:
Really great story! Keep going! :)

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Review #7, by Beth Draco's Ghosts

9th December 2015:
Draco also tried to use the Cruciatus Curse on Harry in the 6th book and no one made him do that.

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Review #8, by Donnalyn Draco's Ghosts

14th November 2015:

I just wanted to stop by and say that I've enjoyed your story. Its hard to find a good Draco and Luna pairing. Not that many people are fans of Luna and Draco so its hard to find a good story, especially one that's been completed. Even then i cant help but feel sad because I've read them all. So, i was surprised to find your short story. Anyways what im trying to say is that i hope you continue on and that you give this story a chance. I would love to find out what happens. I cant wait to see if Draco lets Luna close to him. It seems like hes getting use to her being a constant person in his life. Although i wish he'd hurry up and just accept her friendship and fall deeply in love with her.
Please please update soon. I cant wait to find out what happens.

-A Draco and Luna Fan

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Review #9, by Patricia Poeta Out of the Ordinary

20th January 2015:
Very good, you write very well.

Author's Response: Psh, stop it - you're too kind!

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Review #10, by fusxoxo Draco's Ghosts

10th December 2014:
You should keep writing, it's really good! I love the way you describe feelings. ;)

Author's Response: You... you do? I'm actually self-conscious about that hahaha. Thank you!

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Review #11, by Drunaforever Draco's Ghosts

2nd December 2014:
I love this story! You're doing a great job of writing Draco and Luna, keep up the good work! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: You are being way, way too kind here haha. But thank you so much!

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Review #12, by TorilunA Draco's Ghosts

24th November 2014:
Ur Halloween outfit sounds awesome, I didn't wear anything cos Halloween isn't that big in my city... This story's awesome btw.
It shouldn't even be a btw since the review is supposed to be about the story but I'm weird :O

Oh wow it's 3am where I live, better sleep soon. Anyway, I hope you update soon and good luck for whatever you need good luck for.

Okay I'm not making any sense


P. S. I really don't get how people can write so well, my essays are horrible. Every time I read them after I get them back, I'll just cringe and wonder how I didn't notice the awful grammar and spelling and horrible plot.
Okay I don't get why I wrote any of that but like I said, I'm weird:/

May the odds be ever in your favor

Author's Response: That's kind of a bummer - I love Halloween.

Psh, to tell you the truth I'm still learning. I'll always be learning. But I guess that's true with anything you do in life - especially creative pursuits.

Anyway, thanks for the review!

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Review #13, by Morgan Night and Day

3rd September 2014:
This is so good! I love it, I can't wait to hear more of the story. Update soon! :)

Author's Response: omg thank you *dissolves into a puddle*

Tbh, idk when the next update will be, but if not before October then probably during the first week or two of October xD

Thank you so much for the kind review! :)

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Review #14, by Avanell 2 Out of the Ordinary

4th July 2014:
Very interesting story, nice opening chapter :D

Author's Response: Oh, well thank you! I hope you've gone on to read the next chapters :p
Also, an update should be along soon!

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Review #15, by Henria Night and Day

24th June 2014:
I cannot wait for more! Awesome job! Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review!
An update should be along soon ;)

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Review #16, by kendra Exchanging Glances

20th October 2013:
I love this story! Please update it!~

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you like it and I'm actually about to start working on the next update!


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Review #17, by LittleLionGirl Exchanging Glances

18th July 2013:
Well JB I have to congratulate you on another chapter well written! You are doing a fantastic job! The situations seem so real and the characters are pretty darn accurate. I liked how Luna pointed out that crazy isn't contagious and she shrugged off the unwanted classroom attention. I wonder how Pansy will react to Draco's "official dump". Maybe Blaise will take his place??? I think it was very Draco-ish of Drake to blow Pansy off :) Won't she be angry? Hehe :} I like that you had Draco walk off rather than help pick up Hermione's things; because we both know that wouldn't happen. Luna's last line is so innocent and blunt I love it :) Please write some more of this lovely story! It is most deffinatly on my shelf of Fan-Fic reads. Oh and I love the banner that you have!

Author's Response: Awhhh gosh, you are just - you have just made my day! I've really put a lot of thought into this and after reading your review I feel like it's paid off well so I am really freaking happy now hahaha. And YES, we DO know that Draco wouldn't help Hermione pick up her things lol. That's actually something that crossed my mind. and I'm really glad you loved Luna's last line (I love it too haha).

And, believe me, I will definitely write more for Acceptance! I really like the ideas I have for it so far. And eek, that makes me excited that it's on your fanfic shelf hehe :)

P.S. I love the banner too! angelic. over at tda did a FANTASTIC job on it!!!


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Review #18, by LittleLionGirl Out of the Ordinary

18th July 2013:
Wow. I think this chapter is a really great start to a story about my most favorite pairing! Yes I am a Druna fan so don't judge haha. I like how odd Luna seems and you have her characterized perfectly in my non professional opinion. She seems like the person to chase down a your welcome :) Draco was very well written and I completely understand his embarrassment with Luna kissing his cheek down to the guilt he feels for not being able to help Luna during the time she was his captive. Your detail in the story was a tad vague at parts but that is okay since it is a start up chapter. I really enjoyed the background at the beginning and I understand why you picked the era you did because is isn't post Hogwarts yet :) Great job cant wait to see what is next!

Author's Response: I AM JUDGING YOU!, I'm just kidding. I really have no place to judge anybody's ships seeing as I like some odd ones myself. Anyway, I am so so glad that you think that - everything from Luna's characterization to the era I picked - because I was a bit concerned about everything you just pointed out lol.

Anyway, I'm really REALLY glad you've liked it! And THANK YOU for reviewing!

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Review #19, by K.Braun Exchanging Glances

12th July 2013:
I have only come across the shipping of Draco and Luna today. I looked around the internet and found this. I'm loving it and can't wait for more! I really like how you are keeping up Draco's personality. I also like how its from his point of view because he is the one being pursued(or at least seems to be) by Luna, so you don't really know what she will do next. Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: Ooh yay! I was afraid I'd do a poor job with his personality, even more so than Luna's. And I did that because it's more often that we follow the character who's pursuing the other character in the ship, so I just wanted to do something different.

Anyway, thank you for the review! It made my day!

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Review #20, by Echosplash Exchanging Glances

11th July 2013:
Cute~ I love this story, and I love all of your others. Keep up the good work.
Ten points to Gryffindor!

Author's Response: Awh well thank you! It means a lot!

And how did you know I'm in Gryffindor!? hahaha

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Review #21, by Shay_Gryff Out of the Ordinary

28th April 2013:
Hello JustBrilliant! Great story idea! And congratulations, you are the winner of the Anything but Canon challenge!

I normally HATE Draco, but this story seem really interesting and I can't wait to read more of your take on it! Written beautifully and has me waiting on edge for more! Let me know what chapters/stories you would like me to review (:


Author's Response: OOOH REALLY?! YAY! :D hahaha

I normally hate him, too, actually, but that's partly why I picked this ship lol... BUT I am super happy that you like it/find it interesting/want more! :D And I am going to the forums as we speak to send you a message about the reviews ;)

& I will DEFINITELY keep writing! (:

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Review #22, by Christen Out of the Ordinary

25th April 2013:
Oh don't you worry Luna he'll come around. They always do. I love this by the way!

Author's Response: Yeah it'll take him a little bit of time, but surely he will :P

Thanks a ton for the review - I'm glad you love it! :D

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Review #23, by Kelsey Out of the Ordinary

18th April 2013:
It was great! Are you going to do another chapter? Maybe there could be more romance if you do another installment, how Draco ssslllooowwwly realizes he is falling for her :) Just a suggestion :)

Author's Response: Well thank you and YES I'm going to be doing another chapter! And haha thanks for the suggestion, I will keep it in mind when writing chapter 2 :P

Thanks for the review!! :)

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