Reading Reviews for The Next Great Adventure
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by RedHair_GreenEyes The Next Great Adventure

20th July 2014:
I was literally sobbing at the end... BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. LOVED IT SO SO SO SO SO MUCH!

 Report Review

Review #2, by sbmcneil The Next Great Adventure

14th December 2013:
Very beautiful story! I'm crying as I'm typing this so its hard to review, but very, very well done.

 Report Review

Review #3, by Clairyfairy83 The Next Great Adventure

30th July 2013:
Brilliant!! I have never read anything like it before.. Kind of want more, tales of the afterlife.. Please??? Lol

Author's Response: I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so much. As for more "tales of the afterlife" ... I'll say I've a couple ideas about another chapter or 2, but I haven't written anything yet.

Thanks for reviewing.

 Report Review

Review #4, by FriendofMolly The Next Great Adventure

27th July 2013:
BRAVO! That was so exactly the way Harry would want to leave to the next great Adventure. I am impressed with the intruder detectors that Harry set up. They certainly surprised his escorts. Thank you for allowing him to hold things up until Ginny said her goodbye thus releasing him to move on. I really enjoyed his welcoming committee. But how in the world would Harry have given the cloak back? Death should be happy that the two most destructive are either lost or rendered broken, now that Harry is dead.
Good One,
PS If you are still immersed in this storyline, you could give us a second chapter. It could be of either Harry going to bring Ginny and/or his meeting up with all the females who have gone on before. Please!

Author's Response: Thanks. I couldn't imagine this happening any other way. With all of the stuff that Harry experiences in his youth, he really deserved a nice long life. Yeah, I'm sure they were surprised at their greeting. The defenses he put up were really about Harry getting as much time as he could to be with Ginny. Death was ironically a fun character to write. He's very human in the way that he hates parts of his job, mainly the people he has to associate with.

Hmmm, another chapter to this story. I hadn't thought of it really, but now. I love your suggestions and I'll say I'm definitely thinking of some ideas. Thank you so much for all the wonderful words.

 Report Review

Review #5, by Acceber The Next Great Adventure

27th July 2013:
Wow. Just wow. That was an incredible read, there were so many incredibly well thought details, like death asking for the cloak back. You are an extremely gifted writer and the whole idea behind this is so original and amazing. This is genuinely one of the best things I've read for a long time. You should be proud of yourself. Wow.

Author's Response: Thank you. I take great pride in the things I write and it means a lot when someone takes the time to tell me what they think of my writing. I really feel that a story is won or lost in the details of it, so I always focus on refining anything I can to make the story great.

Again, thank you so much for all the complementary words.

 Report Review

Review #6, by bowtruckleinlove The Next Great Adventure

17th June 2013:
Wow... tears much!!! A really good story,my only suggestion would be to have put an * or two in between ginny's part and Harry's as they came out of the pensieve, to start with it almost seems like you repeated yourself until it's clear that it's Harry's point of view then.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much. I hadn't meant for it to be such a tear jerker but it sorta came out that way as I started writing it. I didn't realize it but now that you pointed it out, I can definitely see how that part could have been confusing. I'll try and fix it. Thanks for the review, I love the feedback.

 Report Review

Review #7, by AriPotter The Next Great Adventure

30th March 2013:
That was great! Really different than anything I've read before. I loved the interactions between everyone, especially Death. Very well done!

Author's Response: Thanks. I was amazed at how easily all of the characters came, they pretty much wrote themselves for the most part. That was really something I was trying to do: write something that I hadn't read on here before.

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login