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Review #1, by soapman333 This must be a very bad joke.

2nd April 2013:
What a horrible first date :P!

I disagree with your last reviewer, I didn't actually think Lily was that annoying. Maybe I just expected her to be hesitant with the whole thing?

Well, I love how they resolved their conflicts with jokes!

Ha, James ignored her, left her in the pitch, and got lost. Poor kid, but it makes for an entertaining read. Thanks for your participation in my silly little challegne :D

Author's Response: Hey,
Wow, I din't think you read it this fast... When I posted it on the forum in was 1 o'clock at night here.

I thought James couldn't keep his full attention to Lily while at a Quidditch match. That would be like trying to make me pay attention to ooking while there is a big stack of Harry Potter matterial to read, thet won't work :)

Yeah, I wanted them to part on good terms, even though the date didn't go as expected. I though making Lily laugh would be a good way to do that. If a girl laughs at your silly jokes she likes you, even when she doesn't know it herself. Or that's my philosophy.

Thanks for reading it so quick and reviewing on it and making my horrible morning a little better even though I do now have to hurrie to get to school in time.


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Review #2, by AlexFan This must be a very bad joke.

25th March 2013:
Hello! Okay, so I came across this and I really like James an Lily. Anyway, I'm going to get the criticism out of the way.

Lily sounded like she was whining the entire time (especially the part where she got annoyed because James wasn't paying attention to her while they were at a Quidditch Game). That's what it felt like to me at least but I'm sure you didn't mean it that way. There were also some grammatical errors that maybe you should fix.

I loved James though and Lily seemed pretty nice, this was a really cute one-shot and I really enjoyed it. Good job on it!

Author's Response: Hey,
Thanks. Nice to hear that you liked it.
I thought Lily was a little whiny myself, but I didn't really know how to fix it...
Any tips would be welcome.
I'm not the best at grammar so I'm going to find a beta for that.

Thanks for the review!

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