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Review #1, by hermionepontmercy99 To tell the friends

1st July 2013:
Hello I'm hermionepontmercy99,
I love Dramione stories, this is written brilliantly that's why I gave it 10/10. Please write more!

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Review #2, by pingu To tell the friends

30th April 2013:
It's me! A little bit late, but I am coming again for your story.
I never think of my review can motivate one to continue his/ her writing. It is really a big surprise,also an encouragement, for me. Thank you for mentioning me and your fantastic story!
I cannot wait to read more chapters. It's still so great and promising! Would you write how Dramione get together? I am looking forward it. I love flashback. :))) Please, keep writing!
btw, Hermione's situation really breaks my heart.

Author's Response: Thank you, I do love reviews and can never get enough of them! I will propably give you another shout out, so watch out! ;)
In regards to the background, I am writing the next chapter so you should see it in a few days, and am plotting out the background. After much consideration, I am going to be writing a prologue story to their relationship!
With regards to Hermione's situation, I am trying to make her in a good light, and for people to pity her.
Thanks again,
A.D ;)

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Review #3, by HeyMrsPotter prologe- a test

5th April 2013:
I have to leave a review on this chapter cause I can't reply on the other one.
I think flashbacks can sometimes be a little confusing, maybe you could have Draco and Hermione explain how their relationship came about, either to Ron and Harry when they've calmed down or to Ginny as she already suspects? Not sure how serious you want to make Hermione's injuries after Rons attack but you could even have her in the hospital wing and have Draco tell them at her bedside?
As for telling the parents I would imagine as they're both still at school the parents would have to come to Hogwarts to have in explained with a teacher present, that opens up the opportunit for you to have some sort of drama with lucius malfoy and his prejudice against muggles if both sets of parents are told at the same time. Hope this helps!

Author's Response: Thank you!! I have already decided to have Hermione in the hospital wing, and I think I will have her explain when her friends come and visit! As for Lucuis, I have a brilliant little plot twist lined up for that! And with the parents, well they have to be notified that Hermiones in hospital and why don't they? ;)

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Review #4, by RosieWeasly11 To tell the friends

5th April 2013:

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm writing another story at the moment as well so once i finish the next chapters and get them validated it will be a week tops!! Please keep reviewing!!
Thanks again,
A.D ;)

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Review #5, by khayziet To tell the friends

4th April 2013:
The story sounds promising. It would be nice if you would include a backround on how Dramione got together. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I've also been thinking about how to do that but I'm not sure yet, either I will write a prologue or I will have flash backs through the story. What do you think?
Thanks again,
A.D ;)

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Review #6, by HeyMrsPotter To tell the friends

3rd April 2013:
Good start so far, very captivating cliff hanger too, I definitely want to read more. I'm interested to read how Hermione and Draco ended up dating, I hope you go into that later on!
There are a few mistakes in terms of spelling/grammar, it might be worth getting a beta to read over your chapters before you post them to the site. Some readers are awfully picky and will stop reading a story at the first missed comma (not me, thankfully!)
I look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: thanks for that! I will reread my chapters and make sure everything is okay! Also, I was thinking of either writing a prologue or have flashbacks through the relationship. What do you think?
Hermione and Draco also need to tell their parents, but I'm not sure how it should go down, any ideas?
thanks again!
A.D ;)

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Review #7, by pingu prologe- a test

25th March 2013:
I am enjoying the shift of perspectives. The story flow is great. My emotion follows the narration ups and down, especially the countdown part. It is indeed a nice opening. I am looking forward to the following story and how their friends will react. Please keep writing!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the support and feedback! I can really see the satasfaction of writing fanfiction. I will try and post as soon as possible!

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