I really like this introduction! You have a really nice tone to your writing and use great imagery.
I was drawn in straight away by the banner, but it's a bit disappointing that you don't have a story description - unless you're simply relying on your beautiful banner of course.
But yes, great start. Looking forward to more!Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting, as a new author I really do appreciate it!
Funny story about the banner actually, I was just toying around in photoshop and came up with that. It actually inspired me to write this story, when it's usually the other way around! And thank you so much for reminding me to add a summary, I wouldn't have remembered otherwise! But yes, thank you for my first review, and for being so lovely about it. Report Review
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