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Review #1, by sapphire25 Hallelujah

29th March 2013:
I really loved it! Sort of sad how Teddy died and all, and Victoire was left without even their baby, but still, it's gorgeous. I love the song, and the plot fitted it perfectly. I'm happy Dom got a happy ending in the end, and I'm glad it was with Connor. He seems pretty cool. Anyway, it was brilliant! :)

Author's Response: sapphire25,

First of all before anything, I would like to thank you for reading this piece, and reviewing. I'm extremely glad to hear that you loved this piece and found the plot rather fitting to the song.

I myself, am a huge fan of the song, which is strange because I'm not strongly fond of piano based music. I don't know, just something about Rufus' cover struck something within me, so strongly that it moved me to write this.

And Teddy and Victoire. It really is devastating what happened to their relationship isn't it? But I only found it fair for everyone to lose. Teddy lost Dom and his life. Vic lost her baby and the man she loved. Dom ended up loosing both the men she loved.

But despite what they lost, they all had won something as well. Teddy won Vic. Vic won Teddy and the perfect marriage. And in the end, Dom eventually won Connor, whom she waited so painfully for.

It was all basically a story of winning and loosing.

Again, thank you for the review and reading. I'm very glad that you had enjoyed it. :)


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Review #2, by Anonymous Hallelujah

27th March 2013:
I had tears in my eyes when I read this.
You have real talent for writing, if there were not slight mistakes when you swap between past and present tense I would think that this is a published story.
It is just so well written, really full of feeling, and the way you describe things really make them come to life. The story is so utterly unique in its form and- well I could probably go on like this for a while, but to sum it up in one word I would say 'AMAZING!!!' fits best :)

Author's Response: Anonymous,

Whoever you are, and whether you see this response or not, I'd like you to know how thankful I am for your review.

I'm sorry that I made you cry, but at the same time, I'm not, because for me to be able to pull such an emotion from my readers feels amazing. I'm glad that you enjoyed this and felt as if I've breathed life into them...something that I really strived to do in this piece.

As for the shifts between past and present, I must say, they were pretty difficult, so I tried it the best I could. I'm planning on revising this again, whenever I have the time, but for now, repolishing this would have to wait.

Thank you, again, whoever you are for this wonderful review. You have no idea how much that had made my day!

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