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Review #1, by Siriusly89 Something Strange

22nd March 2013:
Hi! Siriusly89 here with your requested review!

So, this is a very good start to the whole shebang. Not much happening in this chapter, but lets face it, first chapters are for introductions, and you gave us a really good insight to the type of person Amber is.

I'm just going to place my bets now, but I'd say she's going to be a Hufflepuff. She didn't even blink when the bullies were picking on her, but then she remembered they bullied another girl, and she laid into them! That is a very Hufflepuff-ish thing to do!

Although she might be a Gryffindor as well, you'd never know!

Just one small, tiny, minor detail that you really don't have to worry about. There actually is a school for witches in America. Its called 'Salem Witches' Institute'. It is disputed whether its an actual 'school' school, or whether its sort of like a union for older witches, but it really isn't very relevant!

Just letting you know :)

Feel free to re-request :D

Author's Response: Thankyou so much! I'm afraid not much happens in the next chapter either - I'll have to do something exciting in the third! I'll mention 'Salem Witches' Institute at some point; thanks for letting me know.

Thanks again!

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