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11 Reviews Found

Review #1, by bookworm530 I Am Colorblind

1st June 2013:
Interested in seeing how the ball turns out...update soon : )

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Review #2, by i Youth Is Wasted On The Young

27th May 2013:
No that is all kinds of wrong

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Review #3, by bookworm530 Youth Is Wasted On The Young

26th May 2013:
Hmm interesting turn of events...can't wait for more!

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Review #4, by bookworm530 Curiosity Killed The Cat

19th May 2013:
Loving this fic so far! Definitely a unique plot and great chemistry between the characters. Update soon!

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Review #5, by MadiMalfoy Curiosity Killed The Cat

17th May 2013:
Was not expecting that, OH MY GOD!!! :D Definitely an unexpected twist, for sure! Just a few nitpicky things for you--just a few spelling/grammar errors here and there, but that can be fixed with a quick once-over. Also, I feel like the characterization of Narcissa Malfoy in regards to Hermione is a little OOC, as she technically should hate her, or at least strongly dislike her. I think if you lengthen the last scene a little bit to draw out the suspense and give us a few more details, that would improve the magnitude of the last line. Great job though, wonderful so far! :) xx

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Review #6, by Yayy im a Hufflepuff Curiosity Killed The Cat

16th May 2013:
oh so good. well done.. cannot wait until the next chapter I want to know more :D

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Review #7, by MadiMalfoy Childhood Is The Kingdom Where Nobody Dies

15th May 2013:
Hey there! Just a few things for you to improve on and then lots of great things! You have a few grammar/spelling errors here and there that interrupted the flow and consistency. Also, make sure that if you are trying to keep the characters as close to canon as possible, make them sound and act like they should. Ron is a little bit too crazy for my taste, but that's just my personal opinion. Now onto the good things! Your minimalistic summary intrigued me from the beginning! You drew me in and that's a very good skill you have. Even though you have only posted two chapters, a lot has happened already and most of it is not what I expected! Great job so far, keep up the good work! :) xx

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Review #8, by sue 09 Childhood Is The Kingdom Where Nobody Dies

13th May 2013:
I like the story so far it is different Ron is bad and Draco is good makes for a nice change. Keep up the good work I am no good at review I just know what I like and I like it. I don't know about a 6000 charachter review though that is alot of words and liked a said before I am no good at this. Why so many characters anyway couldn't you just enjoy a couple of words about what a good story it is. There is no way I am going to be able to write 6000 characters so here what you get.

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Review #9, by Yayy im a Hufflepuff Childhood Is The Kingdom Where Nobody Dies

13th May 2013:
A very very good start so far, I can't wait to see where you take this next well done :D x

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Review #10, by Sacha Your Optimism Is Primal

8th May 2013:
Wauw, so good :)! Please write some more :D

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Review #11, by Sacha Your Optimism Is Primal

8th May 2013:
Wauw, so good :)! Please write some more :D

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