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Review #1, by MeeshsWand chapter 5 prt 2

29th August 2015:
Found a huge issue with the gift section... misspelled and missing words, inconsistent paragraphs, incorrect names. otherwise, the story so far is good.

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Review #2, by slightly odd kat chapter four

27th February 2014:
Christmas holidays in the UK are only a fortnight long. They start Friday closest to 20th December and normally end Monday closest to 6th January. We also say mum not mom and every midwife, health visitor and G.P. I know (which is a very great deal) encourage mothers to breast feed exclusively, the benefits are portrayed and a mother is informed so well that I have no doubts that Hermione would breastfeed. You are also legally entitled to 18 weeks off from school before and after the birth, and you qualify for a range of benefits from the government.
How would Hermione's parents look after her baby when she was at school when they both work full time? Presumably the baby would be in a nursery, but the fees for a new born are ridiculous. This story would be good if there were not so many Americanisms. Just please don't mention thanksgiving, we don't celebrate it at all, ever.

Author's Response: Sorry I'm from america so Im sorry ill fix it I honestly didn't know

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Review #3, by eladia chapter 5 prt 2

1st October 2013:
can I ask you who is the father of Makenzie

Author's Response: It's revealed in chapter seven only he won't realize yet

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Review #4, by waiting chapter 5 prt 1

16th August 2013:
I hope part 2 will finally tell who the father is I like not knowing for the first couple of chapter but enough is enough you said red hair at the begin so that made me think Ron but he is with Luna which is great but that still doesn't answer the question who is the father. I have liked the story so far it is a good story. So keep up the good work just let us know please.

Author's Response: I will tell who the father is in the next few chapters. Thanks for liking my story

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Review #5, by Nikki chapter four

13th June 2013:
Loved it plz carry on. Xxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much

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Review #6, by someone___1 A week later

20th April 2013:
Noo! I'm just sitting here, waiting for Fred to find out! I'm glad Hermione gets to see her daughter!! Update quickly ~

Author's Response: Howd you guess lol

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Review #7, by someone___1 one month later

31st March 2013:
Ahh! I can't imagine ever leaving my child (well, cat. I am childless lol)!! That would be too difficult for me! It was a pretty good chapter, I'm def' waiting to see what happens. I can't wait to see how Fred reacts!

I'm really curious as to why Hermione's name was never mentioned? The line 'Hermyi.. Hermon... bloody hell, why didn't they call you something simple, like Janet answered' showed up everywhere, though.

Also! You can edit your chapters by going to your account, clicking 'manage stories' and I believe the edit button is next to each chapter.

I did not make my banner! I got mine from tDA (the dark arts), it's a website dedicated to making banners and other graphics. They're amazing!

Update quickly~

Author's Response: Thank you. Thats confusing The line 'Hermyi.. Hermon... bloody hell, why didn't they call you something simple, like Janet answered' showed up everywhere, though.wasnt anywhere in the story hmm confusing

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Review #8, by someone___1 prolog and nine months later

16th March 2013:
Hey! Cute story so far. I noticed a few spelling and grammar errors that you should probably fix. (I'm kind of freaky about that lol) I think you meant Diagon Alley instead of diagonally. :P

So, does Fred not know Hermione has a baby, or what? I"m kind of confused, so I'm pretty excited to find out what happens. Update quickly, please! :)

Author's Response: You are the first one too figure that out. No he doesn't know about the baby or that its his. Is there a way for you to fix the errors and Also could you make a banner. And thank you

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