It was a great story. I kind of got bored at the beginning but the middle drew me back in. Awesome story, you're a great writer.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
This was my first real fanfic, and now that I've sort of broken through the awkward first romance piece, I'm exploring some unique storylines. Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it :)

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Such a great ending! Thanks for writing this story! It is hard to find a good Lily/Scorpius story since most people like Rose/Scorpius, but I think Lily and Scorpius make a great couple! I hope you write another story about them! Great job!

Author's Response: I really appreciate your reviews!
In January I read a lot of next generation stuff, and in every one Rose and Scorpius got together, and it was often talked about that there was all this romantic tension and stuff between them. I thought about how Scorpius was never paired with anyone else, and when I decided I wanted to write a story about Lily, it hit me that I should pair them together. I wrote the first five or six chapters in one sitting! I didn't start posting the story until I was completely finished, except for the last chapter.
I wrote this epilogue-type chapter in my head about five times, but it never felt right. When I finally got it down, I was pleased with how it turned out.
So glad you liked it! I'll hopefully be posting another chapter story soon, but until then you can check out my one shots ;)
Bye for now!

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I LOVE this story!
I'm so sad that its over but you ended it really well.
You should definitely write a sequel!
10/10
-Emma

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really enjoyed writing the ending, but it also gave me some ideas for how I could continue it... we'll see ;)

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I loved reading this story! I'm so sad that it's over! I can't wait to read some of your future stories!

Author's Response: Thanks! I just finished finals, so I'm planning on taking a few days to decompress and just write :)

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I love that chapter. It would be awesome if you did a sequel! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really enjoyed writing it :) I'm seriously considering doing a sequel, but I think I'm going to branch out and try some different things first.

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This is getting tense :):) the writing here is really good and I can't wait to see what happens next. Loving this fanfic!!

Author's Response: Indeed :) So glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!!

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It's about time they got together!!! I love that their kiss was like Harry and Ginny's!!!

Author's Response: I wasn't entirely sure how I was going to do their kiss, but then it came to me to make it sort of like Harry and Ginny's, but reverse the roles. Thanks so much for reviewing this story!!

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Please keep writing!

Author's Response: I will! Thanks for the review :)

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So close!!! They were so close! I hope Scorpius is smart enough to figure things out! Excited to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Just wait ;) I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for all your reviews!

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I am really loving the story!! It is rather charming :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Keep reading, it's almost done :)

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i love this story its awsome .i wanna know howit end pls try to post the other3 chapters a bit faster cause i love it .thanks for writing it ;'

Author's Response: Thanks! I've been updating as fast as I can, the queue is about four days right now...
I'm so glad you like it! I'm trying to write another longer story for when I finish this, but everything I have in mind hasn't really inspired me quite yet :/
Next chapter soon!

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Love this story!!! Can't wait to see what Lily is going to do to get back at that jerk!! And also ready to see what is going to happen with her and Scorpius! Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Next chapter is waiting now! Thanks for the review!!

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Things are steadily getting worse for Lily! Excited to see how it works out!

Author's Response: You will soon! I just posted a new one-shot, so it will be a few more days until I can update LPP. But keep in mind sometimes things have to get worse before they can get better :)

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Oh no... Can't wait to see what plan Lily is about to start! This is going to be very interesting! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Next chapter should be up tomorrow! Thanks for reviewing :)

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I'm really enjoying this story, however it is a bit cheesy. I'm quite excited to see how Lily's plan will turn out. I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback :)

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So good! Please update soon!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! New chapter will be up soon!

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YAY a slytherin lily! i'm writing a slytherin-y fic and though lily has yet to be sorted in it, that's where she's ending up. Bottom line: i'm really loving this story!
~M

Author's Response: Awesome! I can't wait to see what you come up with, I'll definitely R&R :)

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this is such a feel-good happy story and i'm so glad i bumped in to it. harry and ginny seem very in-character, and i love how this story has started off. i can't wait to read more!
~M

Author's Response: So glad you like it!

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This is amazing!!! :) Carry on please! You have a lovely style of writing and it really flows! Thank you!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks!

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Oh this story, it is so great.
Scorily! Never thought I would read about the next generation and like it. I've always been a Marauders girl. And then you come up with this story! ._. MORE.
And a kiss between Lily and Scorpius wouldn't be wrong. :3

Author's Response: So glad you like it! I love next generation/post-Hogwarts stuff because I always had a longing to know what happened after the war and when Harry's kids went off to Hogwarts. That said, I agree that Marauders are fun to read too! Don't worry, there's more on the way!!

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Oh this story, it is so great.
Scorily

Author's Response: Haha mistake review :/ thanks for your other review though!

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love this story! I am addicted! please post more soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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I just started reading this story and I was hooked! Please write the next chapter soon! I really want to know what is going to happen between Lily and Scorpius!

Author's Response: You'll find out soon! Thanks for reviewing!

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It was really good, but you should try to make your chapters a little longer with a bit more detail. Other than that great writing!

Author's Response: I have been trying to lengthen my chapters in the story I'm currently writing. I'll probably end up going back and embellishing this one a bit. Thanks!

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Love it! Thanks so much for writing these! They rock! Can you post the next chapter soon? It's so good!

Author's Response: Haha it's waiting to be validated now :)
The whole story is already written, I'm just posting each chapter as soon as the last one is validated.

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