Wow! Your story is really moving! Well done! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much :)

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Love this. Love all of it.
It's so sad, especially with the meaning behind the words, but at the same time, it's enlightening. It brings a new layer to Lily Potter, as if it's a rose, and you're peeling away the petals.
Unfortunatly, and I hate having to do this, after you know who criticised me for doing it on the bus, but you kinda had a grammatical error. 5th paragraph, 1st sentence. Just thought you might want to know
But in all seriousness, bring out more of these one shots. As soon as possible, please? However, if you are thinking between chapters or one-shots, do the chapters :P

Author's Response: I'm glad you do :) We can talk on the bus if you want.
Lily's great. But I hate the way her story is basically Sev vs James, so I thought this would be awesome.
HOW DO I NOT NOTICE THESE THINGS?! It's being changed. Thanks for pointing it out!
Eh, one-shots are for when I get writer's block on my stories, so there might not be many, but I'll see.

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He never puts lilies down. But he tells me everything.

I like that.

Author's Response: See below XD

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He never puts lilies down. But he tells me everything.

I like that.

Author's Response: See below :-P

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He never puts lilies down. But he tells me everything.

I like that.

Author's Response: See below :-)

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He never puts lilies down. But he tells me everything.

I like that.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I didn't know whether to include it or not, but then I realised it was the closest she ever came to saying her own name and had to keep it.

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What a beautiful and emotional story. I think this is exactly what Lily would feel like as she's watching Harry and his family from wherever she might be. Very sad, and beautifully written. Thank you for writing this!

Author's Response: I was SO worried this one-shot was rubbish until I read this. Thank you.
While Lily was wonderful, I think she's seen too much as 'perfect'- she was human and flawed too, and I just wanted to explore that. I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Thank you so much for writing that review! I was nearing a crisis of confidence until you did.

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