"She’s all confused and doesn’t know what to do."

Well i know what to do: She go to James bedroom then kiss him,tell him that she loves him and happy ever after ok? And Albus can go with Luna's daughter or i don't care who!
I want to read chapter 9 so write quickly!
James-Lexi 4ever!

Lore'

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I don't like your story...i love it!
But (and i'll continue saying this until you give me what i want) i want PLEASE James-Lexi!

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Love your story but already told U, if you want a 10/10 i want James-Lexi.

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No!
I really don't want stupid Albus to be with Lexi!
I want James-Lexi please please please i am begging U!
This time i give you a 8/10 cause i hate Albus-Lexi. If you want a 10/10 give me more James-Lexi. By the way love your story.

Lore'

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OMG so sad! Hate James but i want him to be with Lexi pleease

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Short but great! Really i love this story!

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Ok i just love this story. It is exactly what i am looking for, i enjoy reading it!

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OMG wait. this is like one of the best teen preggie stories Ive ever read. You know erinn1197? She recommended me to your story and its SO good. lol okay bye:D

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I Love that Dom's going crazy about baby stuff and she's not even the one having it. And poor Al having to get dragged along, although if eveyone's thinking the baby's his then it's probbaly a good thing he went.

I'm glad James is taking an intrest even if it is only for show and to prove to Ginny he cares. Although part of me hates him for not caring like Al does.

YAY!!! I can't believe Al and Lexi kissed again. YAY!! They have to get together, I mean everyone thinks the baby's Albus' and it's perfect.!!!

There were a few missing apostrophies but other than that, perfect!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :)

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another kiss between Al and Alexia! I hope they get together after this kiss because if not, I bet that Albus is hurting and wants to be with Alexia! can't wait to read next chapter!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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it good chapter i cant wait to see what happens i still think james is being selfish he should take responsible for his actions cant wait for the next update

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Loving the story! James is such an idiot, he doesn't deserve to have anything to do with the baby! Please update soon :)

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OH MY GOSH. WRITE MORE! IM ADDICTED.

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"I heard him mutter 'and I want you.'" - Yes!! Albus and Lexi have to get together!!

CC-
"her want in it." - I think you mean wand and it might might a bit more sense if it was 'to' instead of 'it'. Her wand to it.

"smiled and pit them in the" - I think you meant 'put' not 'pit'.

I really thought it would have been a boy (because surely if James saw a mini-him he would change his mind) but I'm glad it's a girl and that Lexi is happy.

Oh Lily, I know she crazy and excited but she spilled it. Although she didn't say which brother. I love that they think it's Al instantly and that he stuck by Lexi for saying it was.

I really hope that Al and Lexi get together because at least then, the baby can call Al daddy and it won't be too suspicious if the baby looks like James.

I hope that James tries to talk to Lexi at least, especially now he knows it's a girl.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

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Why are you speaking in cookies and bananas? And I'm serious, if you don't start writing longer chapters, you're going to end up dropping some serious readers.

Author's Response: I dont know. I think its their april fools joke

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This Is A Great Story Im Suprised I Thought It Would Be A Boy This Is A Great Story I Hope James Come Around And I Hope Albus Lexi Get Together In The End.

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aww it's a girl? I was hoping for a boy but I'm glad that Alexia is happy. though I wonder when James will start acting like someone with common sense and not as a git... and I can't wait to see Albus and Alexia getting together!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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Oh my gosh, Al is so adorable for trying to get James to se sense. He's such a cutie.

I really like your take on why Alexia's bump isn't show. It's really original and sounds believable. :)

I did notcie a few little mistakes but nothing a read through won't find.

I really do hope Al and Alexia get together, they're so cute together!!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xx

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I like how Al is trying to ake an effort to make his brother see the meaning of being a parent and I wonder how everything will go from here. can't wait to read the next chapter!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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i really like your story, but it needs more detail =D write more chapters! i really want to know what happens!!

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I really like this chapter because there's more of Lexi and of Al and of course Lily.

I think it's great that Lily's trying to fix their love lives since she probably hasn't got that much experience herself.

My favourite line has to be "James just donated some DNA." - It's brillant and I love Lily for saying it. :)

I can't believe Lexi and Al kissed!!! asdfghjkkl!!! I hope they stay friends, and maybe become smething more ;)

Again you could do with a few more description, perhaps describe what the boys dorm is like. Is it messy?, does it smell? that sort of thing.

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x :)

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This Is Great Story I Hope She Ends Up With Albus

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wow! Albus and Lexi kissed! but for now they remain as friends... I hope that Albus and Lexi will keep getting closer and that one day, they'll be a couple. can't wait to read more!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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I like this chapter very much, I do wish it was a bit longer though, but that's not really much of a big deal honestly. I hope you update soon! x

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Cool story. :) will there be a chapter 5?

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