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Review #1, by MargaretLane I Forgive You

10th August 2013:
I don't read many songfics, so this one was interesting.

I think you could have done with a bit more detail though. I do realise that there's probably more background in your other stories, but I was a bit confused as to what their row had been about and what she'd done that was so bad.

I'd also have liked to know who was actually speaking a bit earlier.

I like the fact that the whole situation with her leaving isn't sorted out in the end, because that is something they don't have control over. You've given us the impression they'll work things out without explaining all the details, which I think works well, because nobody can tell exactly how things will work out, so I like the way you end by characterising their future together as uncertain.

She should have known a Potter wouldn't care about her being Muggleborn, but I guess she's known enough people who do. That's kind of sad actually, to think that prejudice is still strong enough that she expects to encounter it, even after everything that happened.

Author's Response: Thank you. It's really not my best :/ . Kind of wrote it just to see if I could write a songfic.

Thanks, I did think it fitted - leaving it like that.

I always imagined that the Pureblood prejudice wouldn't have disappeared overnight, and that there would still be some sort of way for students to classify each other.

Cheers, SW.


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